Sunday, March 23, 2014

#8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors: Jace

Happy Sunday! It's been an exhausting week for me but I finally finished the course I was working on and that seems to have freed up my mind space for some creative juices to start running. Therefore, I'm leaving more snippets of The Three Thieves and The Dom for when release date approaches (hopefully sometime in April).
Today's sentence belong to a new WIP, totally unedited, as yet untitled and still in its baby stages. Hope you like it, and as always, thank you for taking the time to stop by, share and leave a comment. *hugs*

Elyzabeth

*creative editing to keep to the guidelines has most definitely taken place*
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Jace cursed under his breath. She'd done it again: disobeyed father and landed herself in a shit load of trouble. They'd told her repeatedly that her new boyfriend was no good. 
 Jace shrugged out of his jacket and draped it over the handlebars. He leaned against the seat, taking a moment to enjoy the sun's warmth on his flesh. He glanced at the sky above, tinted darker by his shades. His flesh prickled and he shut his eyes. When he opened them again the world had shifted, everything becoming sharper and brighter. 


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14 comments:

  1. Frank FisherMarch 23, 2014 at 10:36 AM

    Good descriptions. Funny how the world appears brighter when you take off your sunglasses.

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  2. Siobhan MuirMarch 23, 2014 at 1:48 PM

    Oh, I can hear his frustration. I'd change "tainted" to "tinted", but otherwise it's a great snippet, Elyzabeth. :)

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    1. Elyzabeth M. VaLeyMarch 23, 2014 at 2:09 PM

      Thank you Siobhan! I often make that mistake with tainted and tinted. :-)

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  3. UnknownMarch 23, 2014 at 2:10 PM

    Hmm, wondering why the world shifted? How long were his eyes closed? Or, is there some kind of magic going on? Got me curious.

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    1. Elyzabeth M. VaLeyMarch 23, 2014 at 2:13 PM

      *wiggles eyebrows* there's more to Jace than meets the eyes ;-)

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  4. Charmaine GordonMarch 23, 2014 at 2:37 PM

    Good imagery here and more to find out about Jace. Thanks.

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  5. Kiru TayeMarch 23, 2014 at 2:40 PM

    You have me intrigued and I'm wondering what she'd done. Lovely snippet.

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  6. Teresa CypherMarch 23, 2014 at 5:28 PM

    So fluid--I applaud your writing, Elyzabeth. And such a great visual. And I wonder what shitload of trouble she's in??? lol. Good job!

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  7. Veronica ScottMarch 23, 2014 at 6:53 PM

    I'm wondering who she is, first of all, and then very intrigued in general by Jace. Terrific snippet!

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