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Now, onwards to today's sentences. Last week Jace was told that there was no way out of vampire town, but was the old man saying the truth?
*creative editing to keep to the guidelines has most definitely taken place*
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"There's a door at the back, through the kitchen, it leads into the forest but--"
"Eulice what are you doing?" Fear and alarm were written all over the old man's face as he roughly grabbed the woman's arm, and spun her around. "You know they'll find him anyway."
"I'm being decent for once in my life, Thomas, for he deserves the chance we never got." She turned to look at him. " What are you still doing here, kid? Get out before they catch you."
At that moment, the door creaked open.
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The suspense is killing me. Will he get away? Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks Doris!
DeleteI too hope he makes it out. Excellent snippet to lure the reader.
ReplyDeleteThanks Daisy!:)
DeleteWow. Love the suspense. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kiru! :)
DeleteFascinating world building. I'm anxious to get out that back door myself, right with your hero - really a terrific excerpt. Can't wait to read more.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Veronica! :-D
DeleteYIKES! What happens next. I was right with Veronica, crowding her to get out and suddenly.. .Outstanding eight.
ReplyDeleteThanks Charmaine! :D
DeleteI want him to get out...but I also want him to stay and save the little old couple. Not likely though, huh? Maybe? Looking forward to next week.
ReplyDeleteLOL Hum... I think the old couple will be fine, Jace on the other hand... Thanks for commenting, Millie! :)
DeleteI like Eulice! Wow, Elyzabeth, what a cliffhanger for us! lol. Great writing! Loads of tension in the snippet. :-)
ReplyDeleteSounds like if you snooze, you lose. Great snippet, Elyzabeth. :)
ReplyDeleteand??? I need more lol
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