I've been a bit of a nerve-wreck these past few days with a few job interviews, but, I've managed to keep adding to Jace's story. Things are starting to grow dark as he ventures into town and comes face to face with an unpleasant surprise. In this snippet he´s just shown his sister's picture to an elderly couple in a bar.
This is totally unedited, still untitled and still in its baby stages. As always, thank you for taking the time to stop by, share and leave a comment. It makes my day to read your feedback!
XOXO,
Elyzabeth
*creative editing to keep to the guidelines has most definitely taken place*
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“Just answer my questions and I’ll go my own way.”
“We-we can’t, we’re not supposed to talk about it,” the woman’s voice was barely a whisper. Her eyes slid to the side and that’s when Jace noticed them. Two large men stood in the doorway. They were equally dressed in trim black suits and dark glasses. Who wore sunglasses at this hour? A slithering of fear raced down his back as an answer formed in his mind.
“I really don’t have time for this,” Jace muttered from under his breath.
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An intriguing snippet. I want to find out what's happening here. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Daisy!
DeleteHi Elyzabeth! This took us right into action...intriguing! :)
ReplyDeleteHi! Thank you for reading :-D
DeleteI love the tension and suspense. Write quicker.
ReplyDeleteLOL I'm trying Kiru! :P Thanks for stopping by :D
DeleteOh my. I'm fearing for his sister, and him I have to say! I'm with, Kiru. Write faster, please!
ReplyDeleteLOL Thanks Doris! And like I told Kiru, I'm trying! ;-)
DeleteSinister and exciting. I want to know what happens next.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ashe!
DeleteThose two men look scary. Men who wear sunglasses at that time means they're definitely trouble. This snippet had me intrigued and tingling!
ReplyDeleteIndeed they're trouble! Thanks Frank! :)
DeleteYikes...this is scary and has my heart racing. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteThanks Millie!
DeleteTrouble and you've painted it with a capital T. What happens next is always the question we writers want every reader to ask. And you've done just that.
ReplyDeleteHope you get the job you most want.
Thank you, Charmain!
DeleteOoh, very cool snippet, raises lots of questions, with a hint of menace! Best wishes on the job interviews, never a fun process.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Veronica! No, they aren't any fun ><
DeleteOminous scene. I'm wondering what Jace is going to do now.
ReplyDeleteKudos to you for continuing to write, even though you've been a nerve-wreck.
Thanks, Sandra!
DeleteYou have me curious to find out what happens next. Great snip. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Elizabeth!
DeleteFantastic, Elyzabeth. I really wanted to keep reading! Good descriptions. Vivid! The eyes sliding to the side, talking in a whisper. You nailed it!
ReplyDeleteGood luck on the job interviews! Fingers crossed for you :-)
Thanks Teresa! :D
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