Happy Sunday, everyone!
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I'm still working on Alpha Protectors 4, so you guys are getting another snippet from it. Thanks for your feedback on last week's snippet, I've edited it. Today, I'm going to go back a bit so you can catch a glimpse of the relationship between Killian and Prudence.
Enjoy!
XoXo,
Ely
*Some creative punctuation has taken place to adjust to guidelines
Ely
*Some creative punctuation has taken place to adjust to guidelines
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“I
just wanted to make it clear that this is strictly business.”
“Yet,
you requested me for the mission.”
“What?”
she squealed.
“Aslan
told me.”
“That’s
not how it happened. It has nothing to do with us, I would have requested
another but—”
“But,
Pru?”
Her head pounded and she
didn’t reply, trying to find a way to get out of the mess she had created. She could almost taste the savory sweetness of hope, stretching
between them like an invisible lasso binding them together.
“Killian,
you know we can’t be together,” she whispered at length.
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Definitely lots of tension between them. Nice snippet!
ReplyDeleteOutstanding snippet. Looking forward toward next week.
ReplyDelete"Savory sweetness of hope" - I loved it! Really a terrific snippet and I can't wait for more...
ReplyDeleteShe says "you know we can't be together," but you can feel that they can. Love this!
ReplyDeleteBet if she agrees to try it they can work together. You can just feel it. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteShe expects him to realize they can't be together, yet I'm no convinced she truly believes it.
ReplyDeleteSo bittersweet. You set up a great conflict. I want to read more.
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