Sunday, May 29, 2016

#8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors #paranormal

Happy Sunday, guys!

I stopped working on the WIP I had started a few weeks ago because I got stuck and didn't like the way the story was going. So today I'm sharing a snippet from a novel I wrote a while back and which I'm editing to hopefully submit soon.

Anyhow, I hope you enjoy this story, momentarily titled, Under the love of Darkness. 

Edits have taken place to keep to WeWriWa guidelines. 



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Kaila leaned against the grey stone wall and tried to catch her breath. She wiped at the beads of sweat gathering on her bangs and dripping over her eyes. She knew she shouldn’t have gotten this silly haircut. She immediately regretted the thought and fought against the tears that gathered at the back of her eyes.
“I’m sorry, Mel. I didn’t mean that.”
She closed her eyes for an instant, envisioning her sister’s bright blue eyes and dazzling smile.  She’d done it for her. It’d been a while since she’d seen Melisa looking so happy, and she didn’t have the heart to say no and extinguish the light coming from within her. Like in the old times.
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7 comments:

  1. I am very intrigued, Elyzabeth. I would like to know much, much more!

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  2. Interesting snippet! Wonder where this will lead...

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  3. Nice. Sisters and ill thoughts. Very nice.

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  4. Enjoyed the snippet, left me with questions of course! Well done...

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  5. You've got me wondering what she did.

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  6. What an intriguing snippet, filled with so much emotion. Loved it!

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  7. Emotional scene. I am wondering what she did.

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