Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Wednesday Brief! Your Hump day dose of flash fiction!

Greetings friends and welcome once more to Wednesday Briefs! Your Hump Day dose of flash fiction. After several weeks away I finally finished my exams this past Monday! Hurray! Now to wait for the grades to come in...but that's another story.

There were several prompts to chose from this week and though I knew which one I wanted to use, I couldn't come up with a good story. I was about to give up when my chocolate craving brought on a little inspiration for this short piece. I found the picture much later... but it made me all the hungrier. Enjoy!

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Chocolate Delight

Dawn sauntered into the kitchen, a small smile playing at her lips.

“Chocolate!” she shrieked. She pushed him out of the way and dipped her fingers into the bowl. “I have no self control where chocolate is concerned.”

Jayden frowned. He followed Dawn’s fingers as she dipped them into the chocolate sauce again. He swallowed hard, the sight of her chocolate covered fingers disappearing into her warm mouth causing other parts of his body to come alive.

“Dawn, that’s part of the dessert. Quit it.”

Her reply was a breathy sigh as she ravenously licked her index finger. He caught a glimpse of her pink tongue, swirling over the top and his heart beat accelerated. The vision of Dawn’s mouth over his cock assaulted him.

She reached towards the bowl again and he instinctively moved to stand before it.

“Don’t,” he warned.

Her large grey eyes looked up at him in surprise. “It’s just a bit, Jayden—“ She tried to shift past him, but he followed in her steps, impeding her access to the bowl. He grinned as she stepped back and huffed in frustration.

A playful glint invaded her eyes and she stepped into his embrace. Surprised he placed his hands on her waist, trying to push her away from his growing erection. He grabbed one of her wrists but she aptly snaked the other around him. With a victorious laugh, she dipped her fingers into the molten cocoa pot.

His breathing grew shallow to his own ears as she eagerly lapped up the dripping chocolate. Images of that mouth lapping at his balls caused his cock to stir in his pants. He tightened his hold on her wrist, the urge to tug her to him and claim her mouth, strong.

“You can let go of me, now.” Jayden opened eyes he did not know he had closed. “I promise I won’t take anymore.”

“You promise but you’re eyeing the bowl like a cat stares at his cream.”

He wanted to bite back his words as soon as he’d said them. Pussy cat…cream. His eyes roved over her body, landing on the jean clad triangle between her legs. Jayden licked his lips, his mouth suddenly dry. He was the hungry cat, the hungry feline dying to dip his tongue into her sweet nectar.

Her laughter made him look up again. He couldn’t help the grin that spread across his face. She’d taken advantage of his distraction and was dipping a finger into the gooey liquid. A drop of the lush substance fell on her cleavage. She laughed but didn’t bother to clean it off, to intent on saving what was left on her finger. His hand shot out. Unthinking of the consequences he brought her finger to his lips. She didn’t resist as his tongue snaked out and tasted the rich material.


Her protest was soft, more a sound of surprise than a real demand that he stop. She tugged slightly back, but he was mindless of her reluctance. His tongue swivelled over the pad of her finger, tasting, nibbling, claiming.


It was a warning. Of what he wasn’t sure nor did he care. He wrapped his free hand around her waist and brought her closer. He heard her gasp but the scent of chocolate mingled with her vanilla perfume, was intoxicating him.

He gazed at her face. Their eyes met, both searching for an answer to the unexpected situation. She lowered her lashes and extracted her hand from his grip. Fear laced his heart. Had he screwed up?
Daintily, she took his hand and brought it towards the bowl. Trembling, she pushed his hand int the bowl. Chocolate splattered over the kitchen counter, down his wrist, onto the floor and over her bosom as she brought his hand towards her mouth.

“I want more,” she whispered.

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  1. Ooooh chocolate. How can I not love a story full of chocolate. The fact that it was so erotic and sexy, of course, added to the experience SO much. Awesome story

  2. Wow, that was great. Very intense!


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