First of all, I'd like to thank anyone who's helped me put the word out there that Open (Lust, love, Darkness) is available. Secondly, thank for leaving comments on Sunday's. I read them all even if I'm slow in responding. To top it off, this week I've been slower than usual as I've been sick/battling allergies/not-sure-what all week, and have been dozing more than usual.
I've moved a bit further ahead in today's snippet and have edited the excerpt to keep to guidelines.
Enjoy!
XoXo,
Ely
*Some creative punctuation has taken place to adjust to guidelines
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“Why would I be afraid? I’ve done things you can’t even imagine.”
Marcus smiled affably, as if he were trying to make a petulant child understand.
“I’m sure you have, but there’s one thing you haven’t done.” Marcus tucked her hair behind her ear, and she gasped, erotic electricity racing across her body. He leaned into her. “You’ve never
been with me, kitten.”
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The guy's got a bit of confidence, doesn't he? I hope it's justified.
ReplyDeleteInteresting how he's trying to soothe her fears yet intensify them at the same time.
ReplyDeleteHot stuff! A sexy promise and simmering threat all in one. What's a girl to do?
ReplyDeleteNow there's a challenge! Loved the snippet! (And I hope you get to feeling better soon...0
ReplyDeleteHe's got some attitude. I like that. :-)
ReplyDeleteWell done, my friend. Get well so you can continue!
ReplyDeleteHope you feel better soon. What he says about fear is so true. I like how he lulls her with understanding and gentleness. Can't wait to see if he lives up to his own hype.
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