Happy Sunday, everyone!
I'm back! I forgot to sign up last week, but in my defense I was busy writing Alpha Protector's 4 :-D I'm happy to say, I typed The End, yesterday. Now, to do a final read through and send to betas before submitting. *gulp*
Closely related to this story, is the concert I went to last night: VNV Nation. They played two of the songs which have helped me draw out the muse and the feeling of listening to the songs live just brought me back to the story. <3 *I've embedded one of them at the bottom of the post*
I"m continuing today's snippet a little further from where I dropped off. Two weeks ago, Prudence had just told Killian they couldn't be together. Today he's questioning why she requested him to be her protector if she hardly even wants to see him. Major editing has taken place to stick to the guidelines.
Enjoy!
XoXo,
Ely
*Some creative punctuation has taken place to adjust to guidelines
“Because I feel safe when I’m with you.”
Ely
*Some creative punctuation has taken place to adjust to guidelines
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{...} "Why put yourself in this position when you don’t want to see me?”
She sighed.
“I told you, you’re the best in your line and this is
business. We can act like—“
“Bullshit” he growled, the sound sending a bolt of lightening
to her pussy. She closed her eyes.
"You could have requested anyone to protect you but you chose
me. Killian. The man you don’t want to see.” She couldn’t keep
the truth from him, not when he was going to protect her out there, not when
she’d have to spend 48 hours at his side.
“Because I feel safe when I’m with you.”
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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Outstanding snippet. You brought me right into the room.
ReplyDeleteSafe in some ways, but seems rather dangerous in other ways.
ReplyDeleteYou always want the best guy available for protection, but then there are other things you may need to be protected from as well--like your heart. Difficult choice.
ReplyDeleteAnd the truth comes out...enjoyed the snippet!
ReplyDeleteGood dialogue. I suspect she won't be quite as 'safe' with him as she might wish.
ReplyDeleteI love VNV!!! I'm happy you saw them live, they are so good!
ReplyDeleteAnd great snippet!
Ooo they are gonna have some steamy moments aren't they? ;)
ReplyDeleteCongrats on writing "The End." Always a great feeling. Good snippet this week. Is she really safe? I'm curious.
ReplyDeleteSafe and I'm sure other things, too. :-)
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