Happy Sunday, everyone!
Alpha Protectors 4 is out to beta readers, so here I am trying not to bite my nails too much by sharing another snippet with you all.
I've moved quite a few chapters ahead and there's been some editing to comply to guidelines.
Enjoy!
XoXo,
Ely
*Some creative punctuation has taken place to adjust to guidelines
Ely
*Some creative punctuation has taken place to adjust to guidelines
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“We need to go to Barcelona,” she blurted.
Killian switched on the light and
appraised her. His countenance was serious, the lines on his forehead more
pronounced and the line of his lips grim.
“Why?” he finally asked, the nerve in his
jaw ticking.
“There’s something there which calls to me.”
“What do you mean?” His eyes narrowed with
suspicion and Prudence sighed. This was part of what had always kept them apart.
Understanding each other and the worlds they came from. He was a seasoned
warrior, used to planning and seeing danger on every corner or at every touch,
whilst she worked on hunches and intuition, spurred on by magic.
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Sometimes those differences can be good and compliment each other. I hope they are able to work together this time.
ReplyDeleteNo matter why, Barcelona is always a great place to visit!
ReplyDeleteI AGREE, ED. Barcelona is a wonder.
ReplyDeleteGreat job outlining their contrasts, signalling difficulties ahead if they can't get on the same page as far as purpose. Creates compelling tension.
ReplyDeleteSounds to me like they could be a very effective team, if they could figure out a way to meld their differences! Really enjoyed this excerpt...
ReplyDeleteLike they say, opposites attract. Differences can make things interesting.
ReplyDeleteFascinating contrast between the two. As mentioned above, they would make a good team.
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