This story features Dolph, a red headed (click on the link to see my inspiration) shifter (and just as a note, he isn't a wolf). Dolph is having trouble with his ability, so his crush, Bill, swoops in to have a word with him.
Please bear in mind this is NOT edited and I'm being creative with the punctuation to get in those 8 sentences.
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“Shifting is more than the
act of willing your body to change shape. Shifting is something that comes from
within. You can wish it all you want, you can even make it happen, but if you aren’t’
comfortable with who you are inside, it won’t last.”
“What do
you mean?”
“You know
Lisette?”
Dolp
nodded.
“She
shifts constantly because she lacks control over it. She’s not comfortable with herself, so she retreats into her animal form; If she doesn’t figure herself
out soon, she’ll shift permanently.”
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Ooh check you out missy and not a doodle in sight just some fab writing.
ReplyDeleteLol, yep, no doodling today just writing :_) Thanks for stopping by Shehanne! <3
DeleteI like the sound of this one!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Doris! :D
DeleteI like it! Sounds good so far...keep on, keep on. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anne! :D
DeleteVery interesting insight into shifters! Excellent excerpt and I definitely want to read more...
ReplyDeleteThanks Veronica! :D
DeleteI like the background on shifters. nice use of dialogue to convey this
ReplyDeleteThanks Michelle! :D
DeleteInteresting new insight into shifters.
ReplyDeleteThanks Elaine!
DeleteInteresting take on shifters. Can't wait to see more.
ReplyDeleteLove how you used only 8 sentences to provide a new slant on shifters (...plus, the pic was awesome!). Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks J.A.! That pic is awesome, isn't it? :D
DeleteYour dialogue is smooth--feels quite natural. And nice turn on shifters. :-)Well done. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Teresa! :D
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