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password and had permission to enter. Had anyone else attempted the passage without those three things, the ride would have probably been more violent, as the demons would need to decide if the creature approaching was dangerous to their realm or not.
Thankfully, Victoria had trusted him.
Had she not agreed to go with him she would have died instantly in one of two ways, either poisoned by the demon’s air or suffering from agonizing pain, her skin breaking into sickening blisters that would have exploded, leaving her a bloodied mess writhing in his arms. Adrian walked further inside, taking his time to travel the empty passage and get lost in his thoughts for a few minutes before the demon sentinels appeared to guide him to Zendaya. The dragon inside him was roaring, bouncing against the cage in its heart. It was an unpleasant feeling, one that caused beads of sweat to roll down his temple and dampen his hair. Damn, he hadn’t felt this sick since Dragoon had died and he’d sworn vengeance over his body. He glanced at Victoria, passed out in his arms. Her face was surprisingly peaceful. Her cheeks glowed with a healthy pink, her lips parting slightly with every murmur of a whispered breath.
Adrian, you’re an ass.
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He is a shadow in the dark, smelling your scent and sensing your fear...
Legendary
bounty hunter Adrian Ormonde is no ordinary man. His life is filled
with secrets and questions, blood and lust. His only concern for 150
years has been survival and discovering the truth behind his
demon-dragon nature.
Until he meets his new assignment: Victoria Green.
Until he meets his new assignment: Victoria Green.
Victoria
Green has felt eyes watching her every move ever since she can
remember. Then, Adrian appears. The eyes vanish but new dangers arise as
she falls for the mysterious hunter. Cast into an ancient conflict
between dragons and demons, Victoria must trust Adrian’s skill to be
enough to protect her from both the outside world and that which grows
within her.
Chance
brought them together but will love and passion be enough to keep them
joined? Or will the other forces at play in the dragon-demon worlds
destroy them forever?
Be Warned: menage sex (MMF, MFM), anal sex, m/m sex, violence
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Great snippet. Looking forward to reading this :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Dee! :D
DeleteVery cool and interesting world building.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kylie!
DeleteReally great world-building. I was right there, and want to read more. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tara! :)
DeleteYou caught me... where are we going with this...
ReplyDeleteWelcome Michael. We're headed...somewhere dark and dangerous...
DeleteYou transported me to a different world.
ReplyDeleteYay! Thanks Kiru ;)
DeleteOh my, I'm hooked!
ReplyDelete;-) Glad to hear it, Doris!
DeleteThis sounds absolutely intoxicating. I loved it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kastil! :D
DeleteLove your lyrical style. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jess! :)
DeleteUh oh. Is she in trouble or not?
ReplyDeleteWell... I'd say she is, Elaine.
DeleteOh man, what's she in for now?! Nice description. Thanks for posting this snippet!
ReplyDeleteShe might have trusted the wrong guy, it seems... Thanks for commenting, J.Rose!
DeleteThis story is so intriguing - I loved the description today, all the details. Poor Victoria! Can't wait to see what happens next, terrific snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Veronica! :)
DeleteDefinitely an interesting and intriguing snippet which makes the reader want to know what comes/happens next. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan! :)
DeleteHigh stakes. Tension. Drama. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThat was wonderfully creepy, Elyzabeth. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ute! :)
DeleteI really need to read a dragon tale. Maybe this will be the one. Great bit of world-building and I loved the line, "Adrian, you're an ass." LOL
ReplyDeleteLOL Thanks Claire! I hope you enjoy it if you do read it :) By the way, if you're interested in learning more about the dragons in the story, I made a special post on them at Antonia Van Zandt's blog :) http://antoniavanzandt.blogspot.com.es/2013/04/here-be-dragonsand-demons.html
DeleteHe's definitely in a lot of trouble if she gets caught by anyone. Nice snippets, Elyzabeth. :)
ReplyDeleteMaybe he is... maybe he isn't... She's going to be in much more trouble than he is ;-) Thanks, Siobhan!
DeleteI loved it! Great snippet. Talk about descriptive. I especially liked "her skin breaking into sickening blisters that would have exploded, leaving her a bloodied mess writhing in his arms". Ick! LOL So glad she decided to go with him.
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