Today is going to be a busy day for me as I'm taking my dog to a dog show to showcase our agility training skills. Wish us luck!
As for the snippet, I'm continuing where I left off from last week with Under the love of Darkness. Kaila was catching her breath and remembering her sister... but time is up.
Edits have taken place to keep to WeWriWa guidelines.
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Kaila’s
eyes snapped open at the sound of an unpleasant gurgle. Damn minions. They were
back. Her goal was at the other side of this wall, all she needed to do was get
rid of the last of the gatekeepers and she’d be there. Fear slithered down her
back as she heard the loud clap of its webbed feet against the flagstone. She’d
always thought that those that felt no fear were folly. Without fear there was
no sense of preservation. Fear kept you on your toes. She raised her knife and
stepped out of the shadows, sinking the weapon deep into the minion’s gut. The
creature’s eyes widened in surprise, its mouth forming an almost perfect
circle.
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Bye bye, minion. I gather this wasn't one of the cute yellow creatures from the cartoon.
ReplyDeleteIt's amazing the amount of adrenaline fear raises. The creature sure got it good! Nice snippet, Elizabeth! Good luck at the show!
ReplyDeleteWell she's certainly on HER toes! Enjoyed the snippet, liked the mix between inner self reflection and the swift action. Best wishes at the dog show!
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet! She seems like she can handle herself. Good luck at the show!
ReplyDeleteWell, that was efficient! Best of luck to you and doggie!
ReplyDeleteI like a woman who can stand up for herself, so long as she doesn't have the wrath of the minions down on her. Hope you enjoyed the dog show.
ReplyDelete"Fear slithered down her back." Wonderful visual there, and she goes on despite this sensation. Minions had better watch the hell out. She means business. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteWay to go, woman. Protect yourself.
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Pesky minions. Way to kick his butt! Tweeted. Awesome about your dog! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jenna, your use of 'slithered' was sublime. And a very valid sentiment, too. No-fear is not bravery.
ReplyDeleteLet's hope she gets where she wants to go.
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