Wednesday, July 29, 2009

How to prevent reader boredom...

Thanks to this article:

I have just found at what was wrong with the novel I was trying to edit.
It's a major mess that needs a lot of fixing, but I'm so giddy with my discovery that I'm actually looking forward to it.

Sunday, July 12, 2009

I want you...

“I want you, I need you, I cannot live without you,” he whispered into her ear.

His voice was pure ecstasy to her, deep, rich and hoarse with desire. His words meant the world to her, but she wasn’t going to let him know just yet.

“Really?” she replied, running a finger down his naked torso.

“I touch you, I breath you, I can never get enough.” He nuzzled her neck.