Today I'm moving to a new project which I've been working on for the past week. This is book two of Moon Point. The first story was published in the Evernight Publishing anthology, Owned by the Alpha. I've shared previous snippets from this story -when I first started writing it- so you might remember the characters, Lee and Alkaline.
The setting is a club, where the two men have just met and have discovered they're mates, but one of them is a bit reluctant.
Enjoy!
*This snippet has been edited to keep to guidelines.
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"I'm
not touching you, haven't touched you for the last few minutes and yet, you
remain here, unmoving, bantering with me," Lee continued, sweeping his
burning gaze over him. "You feel it too. Down to the bottom of your soul.
The mating pull. Your lion is restless, rising inside of you, eager to come out
and play with me." Lee's eyes shifted, the green irises changing shades
like a holographic image, and allowing him a glimpse of the puma within.
"You want to brand me, mark me, make me yours in all possible ways. You've
pictured us fucking, my moans, your groans, our bodies glistening with sweat as
we climax. Deny it."
Oh the possessiveness. *shivers* Fab snippet, Elyzabeth!
ReplyDeleteLove it - great snippet!
ReplyDeleteHoly shite. Awesome description and dialogue here. I may need to read this one a few more times. Yowza!
ReplyDeleteHot snippet today and well done!
ReplyDeleteSo filled with tension! And they've just met? Wow. Loved the phrase "the green irises changing shades like a holographic image." Fabulous!
ReplyDeleteFabulous snippet. tweeted.
ReplyDeleteNope, I don't think a denial is coming at all LOL. Enjoyed the excerpt, very hot.
ReplyDeleteLee should really stop playing coy and get to the point. Ha ha. Oh, yes, I remember these two and am happy to see more of them!
ReplyDelete*fans self* That was some hot dialogue...
ReplyDeletePhew, I'd have trouble walking away from that too.
ReplyDeleteHis lion is rising ... interesting line (lion).
ReplyDeleteThis snippet only shows one side of the story, but I can definitely feel the sexual tension. :)
ReplyDeleteYeah, deny it! lol Great scene.
ReplyDeleteGreat description of the green eyes. I'm surprised they just met and he's coming on like that. Not wasting any time, is he?
ReplyDeleteWell, there's not much you can say to that. Especially since it seems like he's right! Lots of heat in this snippet!
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet, fun and interesting :-)
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