Happy Sunday, lovelies!
Today I’m continuing with the story I started weeks ago, Luna. I'm happy to say the story is at 18000 K and there's still a lot to tell. Slow progress, but progress nonetheless.
Let's recap: Clare (aka Luna), has met a mysterious, yet hunky, alien who's come to take her back to his home. She believes he's Mikelo, the alien boy she'd met twenty years ago... but he's not. In this excerpt, the stranger has just asked Clare if she has "the mark". Creative editing has taken place to keep to the guidelines.
You can read the older snippets here:
XOXO,
Elyzabeth
Elyzabeth
*creative editing to keep to the guidelines has taken place*
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The mark, the damn thing on her shoulder started to throb as
soon as he mentioned it. She squared her shoulders in a vain attempt to hide it
from his view. If she leaned at the right angle she was certain the strap of
her dress would slip just enough to reveal the reddish half-moon mark.
"I don't know what you're talking about."
Her nipples tightened and her breath hitched at the sound of his
rich laughter. What was wrong with her?
"You're not a good liar, human, yet I shall answer
your question. I am Riddick and I have come for you, Clare Luna for it is high time you paid your promise."
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So, what do you think?
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I think it reads very nicely indeed. I think you have a very nice link going on between them.
ReplyDeleteEeeowww! Paid her promise!?! I love it! Great 8, Elyzabeth! :-)
ReplyDeleteOohhh, what promise? Great snippet, Elyzabeth :-)
ReplyDeleteFirst let me say I enjoyed the snippet and the story premise, want to read more definitely but....Oh dear - Riddick??? This name conjures up immediate mental images of actor Vin Diesel in one of his most signature roles, for a scifi film fan anyway. I'd strongly recommend another name for the character, unless the story is meant to occur in the Riddick universe?
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