Sunday, November 16, 2014

#8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors: A Tempest of Passion #MFRomance #Paranormal #historical

Happy Sunday, lovelies!

Thank you for your warm welcome last week. *hugs* 
 
Since you were all so intrigued with Mr. Dalton *grin* I'm continuing the snippet where I left off last week. (You can read that here). And you can read the previous week:here.
 
Editing has taken place in today's snippet, so please forgive me for funny sentences.


I hope you enjoy!


XOXO

Elyzabeth
 
*creative editing to keep to the guidelines has probably taken place*
#SexySnippets and #8Sunday Sentences  


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“Please, have a seat, Mr. Dalton.” 

She waved her hand toward one of the chairs in the room, expecting the man to sit but he did not move.  A nervous tingle worked its way into her stomach as the heat of his gaze traveled down her body. He was watching her like a dog deciding what end of the bone to chew on first. Irked, she stared back.  

William Dalton’s features had no finesse. To be honest, he reminded her of a wild dog: His hair was unruly and too long, the lines of his face angular and rough, and his lips were too wide, his nose too narrow and his left cheek disfigured by an ugly pink scar that extended from below his eye to the edge of his mouth. Then there was the matter of his eyes.

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12 comments:

  1. I'm intrigued by this Mr Dalton. Great teaser, Ely.

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  2. Somehow, I think that no matter how ugly she tries to make him, she's going to be drawn to him. Great description

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  3. Rough around the edges... Just how I like 'em. Great snippet. Want to know more.

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  4. Ah...what about his eyes? You tease! All these things she doesn't like about him and yet...

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  5. As Millie wrote. . .and yet. Something magical about a quiet man.

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  6. Your writing seems effortless, Elyzabeth! And what a great description. I loved that last line... :-)

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  7. Oh my, oh my, I am getting more and more intrigued by him :)

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  8. Chicks dig scars... or at least this one does :D Nice 8!

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  9. What an interesting description - I feel I can picture him, really well done. Can't wait to find out if the uneasiness he's giving her is justified. Great 8!

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  10. Wonderful descriptive writing! Like a dog looking at a bone, indeed. :-) Now I'm extra-interested in his eyes.

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  11. Loved this snippet, it has everything :-)

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  12. Wonderful 8! Great tension in such a short snippet.

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