Happy Sunday, lovelies!
Thank you for your warm welcome last week. *hugs*
Since you were all so intrigued with Mr. Dalton *grin* I'm continuing the snippet where I left off last week. (You can read that here). And you can read the previous week:here.
I hope you enjoy!
XOXO
Elyzabeth
*creative editing to
keep to the guidelines has probably taken place*
#SexySnippets
and #8Sunday Sentences
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“Please, have a seat,
Mr. Dalton.”
William Dalton’s features had no finesse. To be honest, he reminded her of a wild dog: His hair was unruly and too long, the lines of his face angular and rough, and his lips were too wide, his nose too narrow and his left cheek disfigured by an ugly pink scar that extended from below his eye to the edge of his mouth. Then there was the matter of his eyes.
I'm intrigued by this Mr Dalton. Great teaser, Ely.
ReplyDeleteSomehow, I think that no matter how ugly she tries to make him, she's going to be drawn to him. Great description
ReplyDeleteRough around the edges... Just how I like 'em. Great snippet. Want to know more.
ReplyDeleteAh...what about his eyes? You tease! All these things she doesn't like about him and yet...
ReplyDeleteAs Millie wrote. . .and yet. Something magical about a quiet man.
ReplyDeleteYour writing seems effortless, Elyzabeth! And what a great description. I loved that last line... :-)
ReplyDeleteOh my, oh my, I am getting more and more intrigued by him :)
ReplyDeleteChicks dig scars... or at least this one does :D Nice 8!
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting description - I feel I can picture him, really well done. Can't wait to find out if the uneasiness he's giving her is justified. Great 8!
ReplyDeleteWonderful descriptive writing! Like a dog looking at a bone, indeed. :-) Now I'm extra-interested in his eyes.
ReplyDeleteLoved this snippet, it has everything :-)
ReplyDeleteWonderful 8! Great tension in such a short snippet.
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