Sunday, February 5, 2017

When she danced her spirit showed - Break Me #WIP #8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors

Happy Sunday, lovelies! Things have been a little crazy around here, but it seems they're slowly going back to normal. Today I'm continuing with the snippet I shared a few weeks ago. In that snippet we had a look at Grisha and why he was attending a ballet master class. Please keep in mind, that this is a Dark Romance. *wink*

Enjoy and have a lovely day!

 *This snippet has been edited to keep to guidelines.






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Ayla smiled with full lips pressed tightly together, eyes downcast. Grisha cocked his head. Always the same. He had been observing her for the past six months and her smiles were never wide or open. For him, it appeared as if she were pleased but didn’t want to show it. Either that or she felt she wasn’t good enough. Yet, her technique was flawless and her body lithe and flexible. When she danced her spirit showed through. It was in those instances he saw true joy on her face. That was when he hated her.

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20 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 5, 2017 at 6:43 AM

    Oh my, I feel a little afraid for her, I have to say. Great snippet, Elyzabeth.

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  2. Nancy GideonFebruary 5, 2017 at 9:00 AM

    Oooooo! Nice twist, Elyzabeth! You just have to know WHY? Okay, why???? Can't wait until next week . . .

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  3. Veronica ScottFebruary 5, 2017 at 9:12 AM

    Interesting combination of emotions going on there, his and hers. Fascinating snippet!

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  4. Kim MFebruary 5, 2017 at 9:35 AM

    Obsession, dark and passionate. So why does he hate her pleasure? And what is he going to do about it? Oh, my!

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  5. Charmaine GordonFebruary 5, 2017 at 2:32 PM

    Conflicting emotions in the ballet studio. Very intriguing snippet.

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  6. Diane BurtonFebruary 5, 2017 at 3:06 PM

    What unusual emotions. I'm very curious.

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 5, 2017 at 4:01 PM

    I love his assessment of her insecurity, and I especially love that final line, which made me reassess everything he'd said. Excellent selection.

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  8. Kimberly GouldFebruary 5, 2017 at 4:27 PM

    I feel bad that she doesn't feel free to express herself. I hope that improves.

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  9. Rachel de VineFebruary 5, 2017 at 4:42 PM

    My, that sounds mean and moody. Why, I wonder, does he hate her for looking joyful. Looking forward to hearing more.

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  10. UnknownFebruary 5, 2017 at 5:29 PM

    Intense and complex! Well done!

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  11. UnknownFebruary 5, 2017 at 6:47 PM

    I really want to know why he hates her!

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  12. Teresa CypherFebruary 5, 2017 at 10:52 PM

    Holy cow! That last line! Wow, wow, wow. Why on Earth does he hate her? It sounded like he was completely infatuated with her. :-)

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  13. UnknownFebruary 6, 2017 at 1:42 AM

    So he doesn't want her to be happy, I guess. Or he hates that she can be happy when he's not. Intriguing!

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  14. JennaFebruary 6, 2017 at 1:49 AM

    So it sounds this is personal, not just professional. Intriguing at 10 on a scale of 1-10. Ballet can be so cut throat. Great snippet!

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  15. Amy BraunFebruary 6, 2017 at 1:54 AM

    I love how observant he is, though that last line definitely threw in a twist. Nice!

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  16. Elodie ParkesFebruary 6, 2017 at 4:17 AM

    Yikes, interesting snippet :-)

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  17. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2017 at 4:22 AM

    Lovely imagery!

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  18. Maya's MusingsFebruary 6, 2017 at 12:13 PM

    Wow... that last sentence was a surprise!

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  19. Elizabeth AlsobrooksFebruary 7, 2017 at 10:59 AM

    Echoing here...the last line is a doozie! Great snippet!

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  20. Kiru TayeFebruary 11, 2017 at 8:56 PM

    Wow. That last line!

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