Still writing like a maniac and had to work some extra hours this week at the day job, but all is good. *smile* I'm back today still sharing a snippet from my dark romance, momentarily titled 'Break Me.'
Last week we got to meet Ayla when she was celebrating the end of the ballet season with her colleagues in a disco. In today's snippet she's been chatting with a colleague about the handsome and well known ballet company owner, Grisha Vasiliev (our hero).
Enjoy and have a lovely day!
*This snippet has been edited to keep to guidelines.
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Ayla looked in the direction Katie indicated. Her
mouth dropped open. Grisha Vasiliev casually leaned against the wall. He was unmistakable. He had to be a
good six foot three and was dressed in a suit that fit him like a glove. Her
body tingled with awareness.
“He’s here,” Katie squealed. “It’s destiny.
You must speak to him.”
“What is he doing here?”
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Great description of him! And yes, What is he doing there? LOL Great tease here.
ReplyDeleteOooh, the plot thickens, as it were. :-)
ReplyDeleteYum! Don't argue with destiny, girl! Go for it!
ReplyDeleteI'm intrigued.
ReplyDeleteI'm all for a man that causes a "tingle"! Waiting to learn more.
ReplyDeleteYou may be working like a maniac, but you aren't writing like one. This snippet is beautifully clear, with emotions that are easy to follow.
ReplyDeletePerfect scene clearly written and now for the next page. YUM!
ReplyDeleteHooked line and sinker, great snippet teaser :-)
ReplyDeleteAnd the plot thickens! Love the teaser!
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet! :)
ReplyDeleteSomeone has made an impression!
ReplyDeleteHaha! They sound just like girls really sound when the dream man appears. Of course, in her case, it's more than just appearances that make him a dream. Nicely done!
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