tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post5453923897065856049..comments2023-09-30T15:26:43.733-04:00Comments on IN A DREAM BEYOND...: When she danced her spirit showed - Break Me #WIP #8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-46713436807398964332017-02-11T20:56:54.358-05:002017-02-11T20:56:54.358-05:00Wow. That last line!Wow. That last line!Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-4508736249868836582017-02-07T10:59:38.398-05:002017-02-07T10:59:38.398-05:00Echoing here...the last line is a doozie! Great sn...Echoing here...the last line is a doozie! Great snippet!Elizabeth Alsobrookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18239143833626955490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-10166716940033383892017-02-06T12:13:28.500-05:002017-02-06T12:13:28.500-05:00Wow... that last sentence was a surprise! Wow... that last sentence was a surprise! Maya's Musingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12776974436328266551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-83280239971712637132017-02-06T04:22:59.439-05:002017-02-06T04:22:59.439-05:00Lovely imagery!Lovely imagery!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-90692889795999360962017-02-06T04:17:47.431-05:002017-02-06T04:17:47.431-05:00Yikes, interesting snippet :-)Yikes, interesting snippet :-)Elodie Parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11668732033067177594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-17695631887757214632017-02-06T01:54:10.013-05:002017-02-06T01:54:10.013-05:00I love how observant he is, though that last line ...I love how observant he is, though that last line definitely threw in a twist. Nice! Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-56272443189990720992017-02-06T01:49:33.313-05:002017-02-06T01:49:33.313-05:00So it sounds this is personal, not just profession...So it sounds this is personal, not just professional. Intriguing at 10 on a scale of 1-10. Ballet can be so cut throat. Great snippet!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-64858958589514807052017-02-06T01:42:29.746-05:002017-02-06T01:42:29.746-05:00So he doesn't want her to be happy, I guess. O...So he doesn't want her to be happy, I guess. Or he hates that she can be happy when he's not. Intriguing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-47940256248403515242017-02-05T22:52:31.131-05:002017-02-05T22:52:31.131-05:00Holy cow! That last line! Wow, wow, wow. Why on Ea...Holy cow! That last line! Wow, wow, wow. Why on Earth does he hate her? It sounded like he was completely infatuated with her. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-25540550301615481962017-02-05T18:47:47.142-05:002017-02-05T18:47:47.142-05:00I really want to know why he hates her!I really want to know why he hates her!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-56983124641380311782017-02-05T17:29:43.771-05:002017-02-05T17:29:43.771-05:00Intense and complex! Well done!Intense and complex! Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02422942404526720212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-844639633581646482017-02-05T16:42:02.169-05:002017-02-05T16:42:02.169-05:00My, that sounds mean and moody. Why, I wonder, doe...My, that sounds mean and moody. Why, I wonder, does he hate her for looking joyful. Looking forward to hearing more.Rachel de Vinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13142396128885291395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-25829817879232740512017-02-05T16:27:01.447-05:002017-02-05T16:27:01.447-05:00I feel bad that she doesn't feel free to expre...I feel bad that she doesn't feel free to express herself. I hope that improves.Kimberly Gouldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623715828708451552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-9687834926094940872017-02-05T16:01:41.403-05:002017-02-05T16:01:41.403-05:00I love his assessment of her insecurity, and I esp...I love his assessment of her insecurity, and I especially love that final line, which made me reassess everything he'd said. Excellent selection.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-42135212917072662182017-02-05T15:06:39.172-05:002017-02-05T15:06:39.172-05:00What unusual emotions. I'm very curious.What unusual emotions. I'm very curious. Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-17981166122456008002017-02-05T14:32:19.673-05:002017-02-05T14:32:19.673-05:00Conflicting emotions in the ballet studio. Very in...Conflicting emotions in the ballet studio. Very intriguing snippet.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-89222641935741844142017-02-05T09:35:43.956-05:002017-02-05T09:35:43.956-05:00Obsession, dark and passionate. So why does he hat...Obsession, dark and passionate. So why does he hate her pleasure? And what is he going to do about it? Oh, my!Kim Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556808413747062433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-46712569734376338682017-02-05T09:12:10.885-05:002017-02-05T09:12:10.885-05:00Interesting combination of emotions going on there...Interesting combination of emotions going on there, his and hers. Fascinating snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-46557855405964311112017-02-05T09:00:13.408-05:002017-02-05T09:00:13.408-05:00Oooooo! Nice twist, Elyzabeth! You just have to kn...Oooooo! Nice twist, Elyzabeth! You just have to know WHY? Okay, why???? Can't wait until next week . . .Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-21112548348026267582017-02-05T06:43:34.133-05:002017-02-05T06:43:34.133-05:00Oh my, I feel a little afraid for her, I have to s...Oh my, I feel a little afraid for her, I have to say. Great snippet, Elyzabeth.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com