In today's snippet, I'm continuing with Seamus and Kaila.
Some of you have asked what their relationship was and that's precisely one of the edits I'm working on as to make it clearer from the beginning. Essentially, they are mates, but Seamus messed things up pretty badly and Kaila decided to stay as far from him as possible.
Let's recap: Kaila is in front of Sloth's (a Sin lord) door because she needs to access into his lair to save her sister. She was about to go in when she was interrupted by Seamus, a Guardian. They've known each other for years and he calls her babe even though she hates it. In the last snippet, he reminded her that the rules state that she can't be there and she cannot go into the Sin's nest. He's now physically holding her to avoid her entrance into Sloth's lair.
This snippet has been majorly edited to keep to guidelines.
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She
had to calm down and think of a way to get rid of him. What could she possibly
do to be rid of Seamus? Immediately the thought entered her mind and wouldn’t
leave.
Give
into him.
Her
nipples hardened at the thought and cream coated her panties. She adamantly
refused. She didn’t have time for this. She had to save her sister before she
succumbed deeper into despair and into Sloth’s lair.
“You
know, there is no way in
heaven or hell that you’re going to go in there without telling me first why
you so desperately need to enter," Seamus voice was hoarse as he whispered in her ear. "I can help you, Kaila.”
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It doesn't sound like she's getting rid of him anytime soon. Might as well receive his help.
ReplyDeleteIt seems they both have unfinished business -- or at least feelings -- for each other.
ReplyDeleteNo time for nookie right now- she really needs to tell him what's going on!
ReplyDelete"No Time for Nookie" sounds like a good book title! Ha ha
DeleteI think it might be easier if she accepts his help. Nice snippet
ReplyDeleteWow. *fans self* That was a nice and steamy way to wake up! Great work, Elyzabeth! :)
ReplyDeleteOh my, the tension is delicious! Fab snippet.
ReplyDeleteHot, Hot, Hot. Tune in next week folks.
ReplyDeleteBest of luck Elyzabeth.
I like her determination but perhaps she needs his help to save her sister.
ReplyDeleteWell clearly there's a lot of passion still between them. I vote for her accepting his help! Great snippet...
ReplyDeleteSteamy, *wipes forehead* I think she should accept his help. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteOh, that repressed desire isn't too far under the surface, is it? I wonder why she doesn't admit why she's there.
ReplyDeleteSomething tells me she's going to give in to him. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteSeems like the attraction is mutual. I think she should let him help her- any way he can. :)
ReplyDeleteIts always fun when personal needs first collide, and then connect. Well done, Elyzabeth.
ReplyDeleteIf you can't beat them, join them? And it sounds like she might need his help, anyway.
ReplyDeleteClearly there is electricity between the two. Well if that's the only way she can get past him...
ReplyDeleteOh, a "cooperation" between them.
ReplyDeleteDon't fall for it, Kaila! Great snippet. ;)
ReplyDeleteHm. An offer of help. But can she trust him?
ReplyDeleteI like that he says he can help her, but what will be the "price"?
ReplyDeleteI gotta agree with P.T. and Chelle. Can she trust that help, and at what price will it come?
ReplyDeleteI don't know, for some reason he sounds sincere to me. Maybe I'm just a sucker! ;-)
ReplyDelete~Joyce Scarbrough