SOrry if you came by earlier and didn't see the post. I set it up wrong so it didn't post.
Today, I'm sharing another snippet, from my story, Alpha's Sunshine, in the Evernight Publishing anthology, Owned by the Alpha, which released on the 25th. Next week, I'll probably switch to another story.
Let's end it with a kiss!
Enjoy and have a lovely day!
*This snippet has been edited to keep to guidelines.
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The first touch of his lips was like a rain drop on an early spring day. A phantom drop. The kind which made one wonder if it would soon start raining. The type which caused thirsty plants to
stretch their stalks toward the sky.
Her body swayed forward.
Sisu groaned deeply, his mouth pressing to hers, hot and unyielding.
Thoughts scattered. May reached for him. His hand clasped hers. The pressure of his lips intensified.
stretch their stalks toward the sky.
Her body swayed forward.
Sisu groaned deeply, his mouth pressing to hers, hot and unyielding.
Thoughts scattered. May reached for him. His hand clasped hers. The pressure of his lips intensified.
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**Sigh** what a kiss!!!! Love this!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathleen! :D
DeleteThe kiss description sent me hurrying to the room where the hubs slept on. Heaven!
ReplyDeleteThe magic of a kiss. Fabulous snippet, Elyzabeth! :-)
ReplyDeleteLove the amount of description, great job!
ReplyDeletemmmm...sexy snippet :)
ReplyDeleteLove the description of the kiss! Very nicely written, Elyzabeth! :)
ReplyDeleteOoo, quite the moment and so beautifully described! Loved the snippet!
ReplyDeleteWhat a kiss! Love it. ❤
ReplyDeleteAWESOME SNIPPET!!!!!
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Aw, lovely kiss! Nice way to end it.
ReplyDeleteA very romantic kiss, beautifully described.
ReplyDeleteLovely kiss, such romantic imagery. Beautiful way to end the snippets from this work.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous sensory description, Elyzabeth! Great scene!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous scene, Elyzabeth! Bordering on poetry.
ReplyDeleteLove the comparison to a plant and the sun. Fabulous!
ReplyDeleteVery nice, sweet snippet! :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a sweet kiss deliciously described.
ReplyDeleteI love the imagery of this and the sensual but sensitive description of the kiss, beautifully written!
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