Sunday, March 5, 2017

The intense look in his eyes made her knees weak. - Break Me #WIP #8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors

Happy Sunday, lovelies!

  You're going to have to excuse my snippet today, but I've done some major (crazy) editing to stick to the guidelines. In last week's snippet, Ayla was celebrating the end of the ballet season with her colleague, Kate, when they saw Grisha in the same disco. He's now approached them.

It's probable that this will be the last snippet I'll share from this story for some time. I want to finish editing this baby and I've got an upcoming release real soon which I want to show you guys. :)

Enjoy and have a lovely day!





 *This snippet has been edited to keep to guidelines.


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Grisha appeared at their side, the intense look in his eyes making her knees weak.
“Good night, ladies, you must forgive me for intruding, but I recognized you from tonight’s performance and wanted to congratulate you on a splendid show.”
 “Thank you,” Katie said.
“I was brought to tears by your performance as Giselle,” Grisha continued.
Ayla stared at him, blankly and Katie pinched her arm making her jump and spill half her drink over her hand. 
“Excuse me, I think I see Monica calling me, so I'll talk to you later, Ayla.”
“Katie—“
But Katie ignored her, disappearing into the crowd. Ayla dragged her gaze to the left and upward. Grisha stood like an unmovable wall in front of her, his blue eyes twinkling in the dim light. 

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15 comments:

  1. Gotta love those intense gazes that make you feel as if he sees only you in the crowd.

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  2. A good wingman (or woman) knows when to veer off! Nice scene, Elyzabeth. Happy editing . . . if there is such a thing!

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  3. Yep, another hero to make me swoon. Fabulous snippet, Elyzabeth :-)

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  4. And now she's left along with Grisha, who only has eyes for her. Love it! :)

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  5. Ha! I love how she tries to make Katie stay! Lol

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  6. Hot snippet. Good luck with the editing.

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  7. Nifty, snippet. I felt all the conflict and emotions flowing.

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  8. Interesting encounter, a lot at play here under the surface. I'll read anything you give us, always love your 'voice'. Great snippet!

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  9. Always love intense eyes. Great dialogue, too!

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  10. A tactful friend knows when to make herself scarce. Good snippet, and good luck with the upcoming release.

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  11. The mention of Giselle makes me think they're discussing ballet, right?

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  12. Trapped, but in a good way. Sparks are definitely flying. Fun snippet!

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  13. Get out of the dressing room! Heh, just kidding. Great scene.

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