Saturday, June 27, 2015

#8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors: Luna #paranormal #romance #promises #consequences

Happy Sunday, lovelies!
It´s been a week full of ups and downs and I apologize for being mainly absent. Hopefully, I´ll get my head screwed on right in a few days and start being more active again both here and on other social networks like Facebook. But, let´s go on to the snippet. 
Let's recap: Clare (aka Luna), has met a mysterious, yet hunky, alien who's come to take her back to his home. She believes he's Mikelo, the alien boy she'd met twenty years ago... but he's presented himself as Serrik. In shock, Clare doesn't know how to react. Serrik taunts her and asks her why she is not screaming. In the previous snippet he tells her that her destiny is tied with his people. Clare denies it and  he threatens her. Serrik will do whatever it takes to get Clare back to his world and to Mikelo. 
Serrik has let Clare know that if she doesn't adapt to his alien world she'll die (be killed). Clare runs and Serrik follows at a slow pace until he gets tired, hides behind a tree and re-captures her.  Clare is now begging for him to let her go...

Finally, you can read the older snippets here:  
Snippet 10
Snippet 11
Snippet 12
Snippet 13
Snippet 14
Snippet 15

Hope you're all having a great weekend!   


ps: Creative editing has taken place to fulfill guidelines!
 ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ 
"Please, don't make me go."

Resignation. He heard it in her plea as much as her voice. She was beseeching him, begging him to spare her life as had done countless others in her stead. The thought that this little human was similar to his enemies comforted and hardened him at the same time. The irrational tightening in his chest that made him want to wrap his arms around her vanished.

"Be glad that I am not stabbing you with my sword, Clare Luna."

Firmly grasping her upper arm Serrik led her back toward the bunker.

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  1. Oh, what sweet, emotional torture he is to her! I'm really liking this story, Elyzabeth! :-)

    Write faster. ;-)

    And you take all the time you need to "get your head screwed on straight". Hugs...

  2. Well I'm glad he's not going to stab her. I felt her internal torment. I do hope you get through your "cloudy days". Remember, your family here at W.W.W. is 100% with you all the way.

  3. Well written despite your woes. I hope each day brings you peace and love.

  4. I think Serrik is going to have a lot more trouble to come! Enjoying the story very much, this was a terrific excerpt....sending good thoughts, author to author :-)

  5. Fab snippet, as always, and I hope life gets easier for you :-)

  6. It's kind of fun seeing how he feels a fondness to her because she reminds him so much of his prey.


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