Sunday, October 14, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Happy Sunday!

Today's Six belong to my current WIP in which past and present unite along with magic and of course, love. Hailey, has just tried out a little spell (something about finding your soul mate *wink*) but things haven't quite worked out the way they were supposed to. She's annoyed because everyone thinks she's a ditsy blonde obsessed with the occult, but she's not and she's going to prove it. 




She was a hard worker, impatient when things didn’t go as expected. It was partially the reason why she’d filed through so many relationships. Why stay with a guy when he clearly had nothing to offer? Some of her friends argued that she didn’t give them a chance. She begged to differ. She’d given them a chance, they just hadn’t taken it.  

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12 comments:

  1. Hey, I agree Hailey why stay. :-) Great six sentences and I'll be back for more.

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  2. Bwahahaha! Love that last line and totally agree with it! Great six.

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  3. Sounds like the guys need to start "putting in" rather than "putting out" for her. Great six, Elyzabeth. :)

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    1. Thanks, Siobhan! Yeah, guys definitely need to start putting in, but I admit that Hailey has to put on a little on her behalf too ;-)

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  4. lol isn't that always how it is? Nice six!

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  5. Aww, I feel her frustration. Sounds like a great story!

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  6. This is a good starting point from which to develop her character into something a bit less entitled :) but then I tend to see things from the bloke's pov. Nice six.

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    1. Thanks Elin :) Like I mentioned in another comment, she does need to start putting some effort on her behalf as well ;-)

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