Sunday, January 15, 2017

He knew he had to see her - Break Me #WIP #8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors

Happy Sunday, lovelies!
   
Hope your week was fabulous! Mine was extremely busy with the beginning of the academic trimester but I got some good news which I will share soon!  Weeee!

Today, I'm continuing to share a snippet from my WIP momentarily titled, "Break me". Thank you for all your comments last week! They were really helpful. Today, I'm skipping a few lines and we're having a look at why Grisha is attending a master class...

Enjoy and have a lovely day!

 *This snippet has been edited to keep to guidelines.





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Grisha swept his gaze around the room. His breath caught. There she was. In the front row, a few feet to the left of Phillip. Ayla Clark. She was his reason for coming to today’s master class. He’d seen her name in the registry list and he knew he had to see her.


She was unmistakable in her red leotard with the low scooped back and black skirt. Her pale skin contrasted sharply with her choice of outfit. Her dark hair, which she had pulled into a bun, caused her aquiline nose to stand out. She kept her eyes on Phillip as he demonstrated the movement.
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19 comments:

  1. I wonder what he wants with her? Great description!

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  2. So intriguing. Why is he after her, I wonder?

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  3. I'm intrigued.
    PS: Should I read something into 'trimester', Elyzabeth? Is a baby on the way?

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    1. ROFL No!! I meant academic trimester, as in school, not babies. I work for language school :)

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  4. Well done. You learn as much about her as about him from the snippet.

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  5. And the mystery builds...vivid description of the girl. Enjoyed the snippet!

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  6. I like the description of the girl. Ayla Clark has clearly caught his eye. Look forward to reading more.

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  7. Yoga? Dance? In my youth, I might've taken a master class just because of a girl liked a class.

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  8. Nice description, esp. of her. Is he a stalker or someone who wants to know her better? You've got me curious.

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  9. I'm hooked, Elyzabeth! Excellent job through his POV.

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  10. She is very lovely through his eyes... but I'm not sure where he falls on the romantic to stalker scale, yet.

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  11. Eyes on the prize. Great snippet. Thank you for sharing!

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  12. Interesting... I can only imagine how their interactions are going to go. ;)

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  13. Lovely description of her, Elyzabeth! I'm intrigued by the master instructor in this class--and it seems that she is too. :-)

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