Sunday, January 15, 2017

He knew he had to see her - Break Me #WIP #8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors

Happy Sunday, lovelies!
   
Hope your week was fabulous! Mine was extremely busy with the beginning of the academic trimester but I got some good news which I will share soon!  Weeee!

Today, I'm continuing to share a snippet from my WIP momentarily titled, "Break me". Thank you for all your comments last week! They were really helpful. Today, I'm skipping a few lines and we're having a look at why Grisha is attending a master class...

Enjoy and have a lovely day!

 *This snippet has been edited to keep to guidelines.





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Grisha swept his gaze around the room. His breath caught. There she was. In the front row, a few feet to the left of Phillip. Ayla Clark. She was his reason for coming to today’s master class. He’d seen her name in the registry list and he knew he had to see her.


She was unmistakable in her red leotard with the low scooped back and black skirt. Her pale skin contrasted sharply with her choice of outfit. Her dark hair, which she had pulled into a bun, caused her aquiline nose to stand out. She kept her eyes on Phillip as he demonstrated the movement.
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19 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 15, 2017 at 4:57 AM

    I wonder what he wants with her? Great description!

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 15, 2017 at 6:55 AM

    So intriguing. Why is he after her, I wonder?

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  3. Kiru TayeJanuary 15, 2017 at 8:39 AM

    I'm intrigued.
    PS: Should I read something into 'trimester', Elyzabeth? Is a baby on the way?

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    1. Elyzabeth M. VaLeyJanuary 15, 2017 at 8:58 AM

      ROFL No!! I meant academic trimester, as in school, not babies. I work for language school :)

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  4. Shari ElderJanuary 15, 2017 at 9:26 AM

    Well done. You learn as much about her as about him from the snippet.

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  5. Charmaine GordonJanuary 15, 2017 at 9:37 AM

    So fine. Wonderful snippet.

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  6. Elodie ParkesJanuary 15, 2017 at 9:56 AM

    Great snippet :-)

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  7. Veronica ScottJanuary 15, 2017 at 11:37 AM

    And the mystery builds...vivid description of the girl. Enjoyed the snippet!

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  8. Rachel de VineJanuary 15, 2017 at 12:49 PM

    I like the description of the girl. Ayla Clark has clearly caught his eye. Look forward to reading more.

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  9. ARHuelsenbeckJanuary 15, 2017 at 2:49 PM

    Oooo, a ballet story. Yay!

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 15, 2017 at 4:05 PM

    Yoga? Dance? In my youth, I might've taken a master class just because of a girl liked a class.

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  11. Diane BurtonJanuary 15, 2017 at 5:35 PM

    Nice description, esp. of her. Is he a stalker or someone who wants to know her better? You've got me curious.

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  12. Nancy GideonJanuary 15, 2017 at 6:14 PM

    I'm hooked, Elyzabeth! Excellent job through his POV.

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  13. UnknownJanuary 15, 2017 at 10:37 PM

    She is very lovely through his eyes... but I'm not sure where he falls on the romantic to stalker scale, yet.

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  14. Kimberly GouldJanuary 15, 2017 at 10:50 PM

    Eyes on the prize. Great snippet. Thank you for sharing!

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  15. Amy BraunJanuary 16, 2017 at 1:24 AM

    Interesting... I can only imagine how their interactions are going to go. ;)

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  16. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2017 at 5:02 AM

    Great snippet! :)

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  17. Teresa CypherJanuary 16, 2017 at 10:13 PM

    Lovely description of her, Elyzabeth! I'm intrigued by the master instructor in this class--and it seems that she is too. :-)

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  18. Elizabeth AlsobrooksJanuary 21, 2017 at 6:46 PM

    Love the description! Great snippet!

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