Saturday, July 4, 2015

#8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors: Luna #paranormal #romance #Weak

Happy Sunday, lovelies!

Thanks for your encouraging comments. This week things have gone better and slowly but surely, I'm getting back on track. 

In today's snippet, you guys will finally meet Mikelo!
Let's recap: Clare (aka Luna), has met a mysterious, yet hunky, alien who's come to take her back to his home. She believes he's Mikelo, the alien boy she'd met twenty years ago... but he's presented himself as Serrik. In shock, Clare doesn't know how to react. Serrik taunts her and asks her why she is not screaming. In the previous snippet he tells her that her destiny is tied with his people. Clare denies it and  he threatens her. Serrik will do whatever it takes to get Clare back to his world and to Mikelo. 
Serrik has let Clare know that if she doesn't adapt to his alien world she'll die (be killed). Clare runs and Serrik follows at a slow pace until he gets tired, hides behind a tree and re-captures her.  Finally, he drags her back to his own world...

Finally, you can read the older snippets here:  
Snippet 10
Snippet 11
Snippet 12
Snippet 13
Snippet 14
Snippet 15
Snippet 16

Hope you're all having a great weekend!   


ps: Creative editing has taken place to fulfill guidelines!
 ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Mikelo watched her.

She was deep in slumber, her eyes and mind closed to the new world around her. A world so different, yet so similar to her own, or at least so he thought. Shed been here before once and she had not been frightened by what shed seen. Why was she scared now? 

Even though hed known her briefly as a child, she was strong. Had she lost that strength? Had she become like the rest of her race? Too weak to do little else but complain? Too weak to fight? To live?
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So, what do you think?
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  1. Fascinating the way you've described his inner thoughts. This reader wants more and that's enough to give a bit more perk to you. Be well, my friend. Thinking of you.

  2. I have enjoyed all the snippets from this story. I think it's building so well. I'm looking forward to more.

  3. His thoughts are interesting. I think sometimes children are much braver than adults, but I've got confidence in your heroine as a grownup - terrific snippet!

  4. Ah, we get to meet him at last. I'll be interested in her reaction when she wakes up :-)

  5. I'm glad things are going better, Elyzabeth! And this story has me hooked! Write faster. :-) I do want to read this when it's done!

  6. Ooh, this is intriguing. I have a feeling she's going to surprise him. Great snippet!

  7. So she found him (technically he seems to have found her)... or has he always been here, just part and parcel of others?

    I love how he feels about humans. He's right to, I'm embarrassed to say.


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