Showing posts with label hand of fate. Show all posts
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Wednesday, September 24, 2014

#WednesdayBriefs #FlashFiction Hand of Fate chapter 5 #fantasy #mfromance

Honey, I'm back! *grin*
 
I had a ton of work last week and couldn't find a momento to write, but this week I've managed to use my time more efficiently. I'm continuing with this fantasy romance which slowly but surely is turning into more, though into what, I can't say for sure. One thing is certain though, I'm having a lot of fun writing it. If you're new to the story, you can read previous chapters by clicking on the links below.:

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4

Finally,  The prompt I used today was Have you lost your mind?

Enjoy!
XOXO,
Elyzabeth

Hand of Fate 5


Have you lost your mind? That is what Jonlakar wanted to scream when his Lord asked him to touch the Kamaira. No one ever asked that. It was out of the question. Out of the equation. Out of this world. He stared at Ilvaneath, his Ilaildar Lord.

 

Silver eyes glinted knowingly. Lips curled into a tiny smile. Damnation. Jonlakar swallowed drily.

 

“My Lord.”

 

“Touch her, Uraima.”

 

He nodded. When Ilvanaeth used that tone of voice it was impossible to contradict him. Only another Ilaildar would be immune to the voice of darkness and light. He walked in slow measured steps to the woman named Mayra. She was human. A dainty thing, really, compared with them. It was incredible how their survival could depend on her. She kept her head bowed, her long hair hiding her features and keeping her enormous eyes and the portal to her emotions a secret. He knew them well, though. Like all Karaima she hated them. She didn’t understand that without the choosing the Ilaildar would die out and without them the humans would perish.


He clenched his jaw and reached for her head. Ilva’s gaze burned holes in his back. Bastard. He knew. He knew the effect she had on him. On them. He saw it in the other man’s eyes. Surprise. He’d only seen that once, over 13 years ago when he’d come to work for him. He’d been a boy then, barely seventeen years of age. How many things he’d learned with his master in that short amount of time.


“Ocalá, Jonlakar.”

 
Silk. Her hair was like the expensive material brought in from the eastern country. It slid through his fingers and fell back in place like a waterfall. Beautiful. He moved his hand further down her back, wincing as he felt the hardness of her bones. They would have to feed her if she was to be of any use.


“Iralá.”

 
“Il- My Lord.” He stopped himself just in time from using the familiar name. His gaze swept to the pointy eared man. He was smiling, his sharp canines visible in yellow light of the coach.  


“Iralá a os jos, Jonlakar. Azlo.”


Jonlakar took in a deep breath. He crouched in front of Mayra. She hadn’t moved. Her body did not shake with the usual tremors of one who was crying or scared. She was still as a statue.


“Look at me, Mayra,” he whispered. “Please.”

 
The last word caught her attention. He could see it in the way her shoulder slumped slightly. It was almost as if being polite defeated her. Perhaps, she expected worse from them. He knew the stories. The beatings. The pain. Some of them were true. Others were not.
 

“Please.”

 
Slowly, she lifted her head. Her enormous brown eyes found his and a tremor coursed through his body, causing his pulse to quicken. The reaction was similar to the one he’d felt when he met Ilvanaeth for the first time. Except, then he hadn’t known what it meant and now he did. Mayra’s lips parted. Her eyes widened full of confusion.
 

“Don’t be scared, Mayra.”


She didn’t speak, but the way her brow furrowed he knew she was asking him for a reason not to have fear. How could she not be scared when they were taking her to the unknown and away from her loved ones?


“Ocalá.”


“Let me see your hands, Mayra.”

She closed her mouth and glanced at her hands. He could imagine the questions. Why were they so interested in her hands? The Kamaira did not know. They speculated, of course, but the true reason was unknown to them. All they were certain of was that the uglier the hand the less chance of being chosen they had. They were wrong.


“Can I see your hands, Mayra, please?”


Jonlakar let out a breath he wasn’t aware of holding when she started to lift them from the floor. Abruptly, she stopped. His jaw dropped as she curled them into a fist and brought them to her chest as if she were holding a treasure. Behind him he could sense Ilvanaeth’s shock.


“Why?”
 
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Wednesday, September 10, 2014

#WednesdayBriefs #FlashFiction Hand of Fate chapter 4 #fantasy #mfromance

Greetings lovelies!


I wasn't able to make it last week, but here we are again. *grin* Today, I'm continuing where I left of with this fantasy romance I'm building up. You can read previous chapters by clicking on the links below.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3


I've had a hard time fitting in today's prompt, but I finally went with:  "It’s my treat."

Enjoy!
XOXO,
Elyzabeth

Hand of Fate 4
“Mayra.”
Her nipples hardened as he tried out her name. Every time he said it her body responded. There was no malice in his tone, quite the contrary, her name on his lips sounded like honey dripping from a spoon. She felt compelled to raise her head and look him in the eye. To see if in their depths there was any warmth or if it was truly all a spell.
“Mayra,” he crooned. Her back arched and she gasped as he touched her spine with his fingertip.  He slid it lower, causing sparks of desire to build between her legs. She moaned. Dear Gods. What was he doing to her? She shut her eyes and chewed on her bottom lip. She would fight. She would not succumb. The Ilaildar’s finger traced tiny circles over her bottom left cheek. Her lips parted as she fought to control her panting breath. A little more. A little more and he’d reach her folds. Yes. No. No. No. Yes. Abruptly, he stopped.
“Why did you pick her, Uraima?”
“My Lord?”
“Why her? She’s got spirit this one. She’s a fighter. She’ll be nothing but a load of trouble.”
Mayra cried out as the Ilaildar wrapped her hair around his hand and pulled her head back. Her eyes flew to the other man’s. His kind brown gaze was troubled.
“There is no doubt that she is beautiful. I can see that. Plump lips, soft large eyes, high cheekbones, a fine nose. Show me your hands, Mayra.”
Her hesitation caused sharp tug at her scalp that brought tears to her eyes. She flattened her hands on her knees.
“Ah, look at that. Long fingers, barely any callouses, no spots. Good hands.” The one on her hair loosened a bit. “Her body is not that great. She’s too wiry, too thin. Her bottom is well proportioned but her breasts are too small. There is nothing we can do about that but I’m certain that some quality food will help get some meat on the rest of those bones.”
He released her hair and she breathed in a sigh of relief. It didn’t last long as his cold fingers grasped her chin and forced her to look at him. The Ilaildar crouched before her. Eyes the color of frozen ice bore into her. Heat swamped her senses. Goosebumps sprouted over her flesh. Her breasts felt heavy, the nipples so distended they ached. She had no doubt that the spot on the floor where she kneeled was wet with her juices. She curled her hands into fists. It could not be. Why? Why did he have such power over her? Why did she want nothing more than to bed him?
“Mayra.”
She shut her eyes. No.
The Ilaildar chuckled and let go of her.  
“She is not immune but she fights it with all her heart.” He cocked his head. “I wonder…Touch her, Uraima.”
“I beg your pardon, my lord?”
“I want you to touch her. It’s my treat, my gift to you for picking such a delectable Kamaira.”
 
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Wednesday, August 27, 2014

#WedsBrief #FlashFiction : Hand of Fate 3 #fantasy

Greetings lovelies!

Well, I know I said I'd keep flashes to 2-3 chapters max, but I'm kind of hooked on this one, so I´m breaking my own rules and continuing this story for the time being. Last week, it all ended with this line: “Did Salec not tell you to enter and keep your eyes to the floor, Kamaira?”

(You can read the full chapter here)

The prompt I've used today was: "Kneel before me and..."

Enjoy!
XOXO,
Elyzabeth

Hand of Fate: 3
Every cell in her body softened at the sound of his voice. She´d never heard anything like it. Deep like the roar of a Virku,  the golden yellow wild cat that roamed their lands and killed their babes. Yet, also mellow like the grey fur of the fat rodents that hid in the bushes waiting for nightfall to steal their food. 
"Kneel before me and keep your eyes to the floor, Kamaira."

Though there was no threat or anger in his softly spoken words, she hurried to obey. 

"Lest, you prefer to do other things for me."

The hairs on her arms stood on end, his sexual innuendo clear as the light of day. Her gaze darted toward his crotch. The bulge in his firm fitting trousers was unmistakable. She swallowed.

"Salivating already, Kamaira?" He chuckled darkly. She bit down on her lip, touched her forehead to the ground and closed her eye, willing the desire to evaporate. If only she could shut her ears. She heard the rustle of his clothes as he moved. His footsteps, barely audible against the carpet as he approached her. A shiver racked her body. Shame burned her cheeks. She'd heard of the power the pointy eared lords wielded, but she'd never expected this. She'd never imagined that his voice and only his voice could cause her body to revolt against her mind. She'd never contemplated the idea that his presence could push her into submission.

No Fear, no tears, Mayra. No fear. No tears. She repeated the mantra in her head as his shadow fell over her from behind. Don't let them see that you are affected. Don't let them win. She tasted blood in her mouth as gentle fingers traced the column of her spine.

"So delicate."

Juices coated the inside of her thighs. No fear. No fear. Gods, if only this simple touch could do this to her, how was she to survive? She'd always believed they had an option. She thought that they could fight back. That they could rebel against them in some way. She was no longer certain that was possible.

"What is your name, Kamaira?" he whispered against her ear, his warm breath sending erotic tingles across every pore in her body. She screwed her eyes shut. She would fight. She'd promised Miope and her mother that she would fight. 

"Kamaira?"

The order was unmistakable but in the crudely spoken word so was her position. To him, she was nothing more than a slave. The Uraima and their Lords, the Ilaildar, only wanted the Kamaira for one thing: as slaves. In the field or in their beds, the location was indifferent as long as they obeyed.

"Her name is Mayra, my Lord."

She recognized the voice of the Uraima that had handpicked her. She'd failed to hear him enter.  “Fear not, little one, I will keep you alive.” The words he'd whispered earlier to her came crashing back bringing tears to her eyes. Alive? How? How was he going to keep her from going mad? Could she even trust him?

Wednesday, August 20, 2014

#WedsBrief #FlashFiction : Hand of Fate2 #fantasy

Good morning, lovelies!

I didn't have a chance to flash last week, but I'm back today continuing the fantasy piece I started earlier.  You can read the first part here.

 
The prompt I used today was: piercing. Enjoy!

XOXO,
Elyzabeth

Hand of Fate: 2

“Don’t cry little one.” The Uraima brushed her tear away with his thumb.

Mayra turned her head. No fear. No tears.
 
The Uraima observed her for a moment, before snapping his fingers. The attendant that had brought the basin with water hurried to his side. The Uraima spoke quickly to him in the kingdom language, the other man listening attentively and bobbing his head occasionally. 

“You’re to go with Salec. I will go to you soon.” The Uraima started to turn around when he stopped and faced her again. He dropped his voice to a whisper. “Fear not, little one, I will keep you alive.”

Mayra stared at him in shock as he hurried through the crowds. He was a head taller than most of her people, his dark blue uniform standing out like a flower amid stalks of hay. He was going to keep her alive? She stumbled backwards as a hand as cool as death touched her arm. The man the Uraima had referred to as Salec had his fingers around her wrist, trying to catch her attention. Their eyes met for a fraction of a second before his gaze dropped to the floor. He relinquished his hold on her and motioned with his hand that she was to follow. He went off in the opposite direction the Uraima had gone. Her steps slowed as she caught sight of the fat four legged animals and the wooden boxes latched onto them. Miope had once told her what they were called. Cabakos. Cadakos. She couldn’t remember. They stood still as people milled about them, sorting things out. Other Kamaira were being led into other boxes. Most were crying. She squared her shoulders. She would not be one of them. A shiver raced down her spine as Salec grabbed her hand and tugged her toward a brown box at the end of the line. He stopped a few feet away and looked at her, then looked down. He pointed at her face, then at a soldier that stood leaning against the door of the box, dressed in a lighter shade of blue. Salec then repeated the gesture. 

“You want me to lower my gaze?”

He nodded. His eyes briefly twinkling with relief before he dropped them to the floor again. Mayra frowned. She didn’t know much about Kingdom etiquette but she was quite certain that looking at a common soldier was not a crime. Then again, she knew nothing about these people other than what Miope had taught her. 

As they reached the box she darted a glance toward the man but he barely looked at them, limiting himself to opening the door. Salec pushed her in front of him. She looked at him for confirmation that she was supposed to climb inside but he had his eyes pinned to the dirt floor. No fear. No tears. Mayra. 

Legs trembling, she entered the box like structure. The door snapped shut. Slowly, her eyes adjusted to the gloomy interior. Her eyes roved to the ceiling where a strange device she had never seen before cast a soft yellow glow. Her toes curled, sinking into the soft plushness beneath her feet as she took in the benches to her left and right. They were lined with colorful pillows that invited a person to sit and relax against them. The gleam of a metal object caught her eye and she ventured further inside. That’s when she saw him. Her mouth dropped open and her breath caught in her throat. 

He reclined against the corner of the bench, his right legged crossed at his ankle over his knee. His black uniform caused his snow white hair to stand out starkly. He tilted his head and the silver hoops on his point ears shone against the light. Mayra’s gaze flickered to his face. She stumbled backwards. 

“Did Salec not tell you to enter and keep your eyes to the floor, Kamaira?”

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Wednesday, August 6, 2014

#WedsBrief #FlashFiction : Hand of Fate #fantasy

Good mornings, guys and dolls! In today´s brief I´ve used the prompt basket, dream and river and somehow ended up with the beginning of a fantasy story. We'll see how it goes and/if I decide to continue it.

As always, thanks for reading, sharing and commenting!

XOXO,
Elyzabeth
 
 
 
 
Hand of Fate
 
Mayra touched her forehead to the ground. Desolate, she watched from the corner of her eye as her basket full of parsnips was carried away by the river´s current. The sound of heavy boots had her focusing her gaze on the dirt again. She held her breathe. Please, please, have them walk on. Please. Please.

 
Her pounding heart drowned out any other sound as one of them came to stand in front of her. She shut her eyes tightly, willing him away. She couldn´t see him but she felt his presence. He was staring at her hands, analyzing them. Her palms itched and she was sure that beneath the dirt coating them they were growing red and moist under his perusal. Let them be unsatisfactory. Please. Please.

Her teeth hurt as she clenched her jaw and silently prayed to a God she was no longer certain existed. The words of her caretaker, Miope, rang in her ears: Use them and abuse them Mayra. Make them calloused, dirty, torn, useless except for collecting vegetables. Or else—The old man shook his head sadly. He didn´t finish the sentence. He didn’t need to. Or else she´d be taken away by them and never be seen again.


“You.”

 
Bile rose to the back of her throat and tears prickled her closed eyelids. No. No.No. A gentle, yet firm hand, touched her head. The parting words of her mother rushed to her mind at the contact: Don´t let them see the tears. Don´t let them see the fear. Hold your head high and plunge ahead. Die with dignity.  


¨Stand, kamaira.¨


Slave. That was all she was to them. A kamaira born to serve them, here, in the fields, in the mountains or else-where, but she was more than that.

 
Almost in a dream like quality, she rose. Her legs trembled beneath her but she wouldn´t fall. Someone cried out. Amara. Her heart constricted. She heard another cry and knew that her lifelong friend was being punished for her outbreak. No fear. No tears. She´d go with them peacefully. She curled her hands at her sides, squared her shoulders and raised her head to look at her executioner´s face.


She almost lost her composure at the sight. The Uraima that stared patiently at her was not demon like. His eyes were a dark brown and his face was as human as hers. Her expression must have given something away because the edges of his lips curled slightly upwards making him appear even friendlier. Her gut coiled almost painfully. No fear. No tears. She repeated the mantra in her head hoping to calm the ball of anxiety spreading across her every nerve.

 
“Give me your hands, kamaira.”


Mayra bit down on her lip, frantically trying to control her shaking hands as she offered them to the Uraima. He made no comment as he took them turned them over in his gloved hands.


“Almost perfect,” he whispered.


He lifted his hand and made a beckoning motion. Immediately a servant came to his side carrying two towels and a basin of water. Mayra heaved. The water´s fragrance identical to the one she´d smelled the day they´d taken her mother.


“Do you not like it, kamaira?”


She froze. He was speaking to her? Asking her a question? They remained silent for so long she thought the world had come to a standstill. Finally, the Uraima sighed heavily.


“I guess I’ll have to teach you some manners before I present you.”


Mayra said nothing. The Uraima proceeded to dip her hands in the water. She flinched. It was warm and whatever they had thrown in there to make it smell like that made her wounds sting. After a few moments, he pulled her hands out and wrapped them around a towel. Gentler than she’d thought possible he started to wipe them clean. When he finished, all traces of dirt, blood and callouses were gone.


“Perfect. Just like a thought they’d be.”


An unbidden tear slid down her cheek. She was doomed.

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