tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post6564497324637411160..comments2023-09-30T15:26:43.733-04:00Comments on IN A DREAM BEYOND...: #8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors: Bear Heart #TheWitchesMischief4 Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-5164185182127485982014-07-28T16:44:07.150-04:002014-07-28T16:44:07.150-04:00Oh, that's intriguing. Great snippet, Elyzabet...Oh, that's intriguing. Great snippet, Elyzabeth. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-43261538473352899592014-07-27T21:57:32.116-04:002014-07-27T21:57:32.116-04:00Interesting snippet that brings out the curiosity ...Interesting snippet that brings out the curiosity when describing a girl that laughs like the dead girl. Well done.<br /><br />http://joycelansky.blogspot.com/Catch My Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06338761214938263819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-14276618118887383992014-07-27T17:43:37.170-04:002014-07-27T17:43:37.170-04:00Thanks Veronica! :DThanks Veronica! :DElyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-26540866684261635012014-07-27T17:42:58.401-04:002014-07-27T17:42:58.401-04:00Thanks Teresa! There might be some answers next we...Thanks Teresa! There might be some answers next week ;-)Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-69592346264692320342014-07-27T17:42:15.941-04:002014-07-27T17:42:15.941-04:00Thanks, Charmaine :) I think that happened because...Thanks, Charmaine :) I think that happened because when I started writing the story the hero didn't have a name. LOL Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-35314197894717171962014-07-27T17:37:19.088-04:002014-07-27T17:37:19.088-04:00Oh wow, very intriguing. I have my hopes up that m...Oh wow, very intriguing. I have my hopes up that maybe the girl is going to be his Evelyn. Loved this excerpt, great 8!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-80581442560647045592014-07-27T16:46:53.967-04:002014-07-27T16:46:53.967-04:00Oh wow, cliffhanger. I want to know who the girl i...Oh wow, cliffhanger. I want to know who the girl is?? Is there some strange twist that his dear Evelyn is still alive??? :-) Good job of planting questions, Elyzabeth! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-67284036430631537402014-07-27T14:17:55.388-04:002014-07-27T14:17:55.388-04:00A lot of 'he in this snippet. I'd prefer h...A lot of 'he in this snippet. I'd prefer his name here and there. Otherwise, it's beautiful and captured me right in the heart.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-46461894061696198772014-07-27T14:02:29.353-04:002014-07-27T14:02:29.353-04:00Thanks Daisy! :DThanks Daisy! :DElyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-79266500261707945472014-07-27T14:02:03.757-04:002014-07-27T14:02:03.757-04:00Thanks Doris! :DThanks Doris! :DElyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-59627661704064259882014-07-27T14:01:26.528-04:002014-07-27T14:01:26.528-04:00Thanks Kiru! My lips are sealed, you'll have t...Thanks Kiru! My lips are sealed, you'll have to wait and see. Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-18745569407929189452014-07-27T14:00:24.936-04:002014-07-27T14:00:24.936-04:00Thanks Heather! I hope you will return :) Thanks Heather! I hope you will return :) Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-55419113824571455052014-07-27T13:59:50.669-04:002014-07-27T13:59:50.669-04:00You'll have to wait and see, my dear ;-)You'll have to wait and see, my dear ;-)Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-63854919661844384432014-07-27T11:23:27.285-04:002014-07-27T11:23:27.285-04:00I loved this. Such a short little snippet but it m...I loved this. Such a short little snippet but it made me want to read<br />the rest of the story to find out why. Super!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-54889821291423562732014-07-27T11:16:59.149-04:002014-07-27T11:16:59.149-04:00Oh my. Those last few lines gave me the shivers. F...Oh my. Those last few lines gave me the shivers. Fab snippet :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-28392938041558420222014-07-27T10:12:13.514-04:002014-07-27T10:12:13.514-04:00This really has me intrigued. What did he do and w...This really has me intrigued. What did he do and why does he keep away from people? Great snippets.Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-50836757116921678952014-07-27T05:42:58.217-04:002014-07-27T05:42:58.217-04:00Great writing and really intriguing snippet. I'...Great writing and really intriguing snippet. I'll be back.Heather Boydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12522336655445579477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-1681378460370495802014-07-27T02:45:27.051-04:002014-07-27T02:45:27.051-04:00erm, I meant fiancee...erm, I meant fiancee...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-20671549521618816022014-07-27T02:45:04.843-04:002014-07-27T02:45:04.843-04:00Hmm, who sounds like his wife, and what did he do ...Hmm, who sounds like his wife, and what did he do that got her killed? Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.com