tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post5731942680556411673..comments2023-09-30T15:26:43.733-04:00Comments on IN A DREAM BEYOND...: #8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors: Bear Heart #TheWitchesMischief4 Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-31684336695788937472014-08-05T10:49:29.287-04:002014-08-05T10:49:29.287-04:00Thanks Millie! :DThanks Millie! :DElyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-92190124564995291512014-08-05T10:49:20.844-04:002014-08-05T10:49:20.844-04:00Thanks Teresa! :DThanks Teresa! :DElyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-6890801994048687252014-08-04T02:30:33.617-04:002014-08-04T02:30:33.617-04:00I think this scene is adorable. I love the girls ...I think this scene is adorable. I love the girls frolicking without a care.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-74751329081951470752014-08-03T18:50:51.494-04:002014-08-03T18:50:51.494-04:00Simply wonderful description of the young women, a...Simply wonderful description of the young women, and of the scene. The woman who caught his eye is already intriguing--the way she's ignoring convention to frolic in the stream. :-) Nicely done!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-72209999242778608472014-08-03T17:59:31.449-04:002014-08-03T17:59:31.449-04:00Thanks Charmaine! :DThanks Charmaine! :DElyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-3756732117060676332014-08-03T17:59:06.496-04:002014-08-03T17:59:06.496-04:00Thanks Elaine! :DThanks Elaine! :DElyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-25783360063853156722014-08-03T17:58:28.195-04:002014-08-03T17:58:28.195-04:00Thanks J.P.! :DThanks J.P.! :DElyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-46072884740103982672014-08-03T17:58:07.804-04:002014-08-03T17:58:07.804-04:00Thanks Frank! And yeah, I´m a little bummed, but w...Thanks Frank! And yeah, I´m a little bummed, but writing is always good ;-)Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-18874664259277099212014-08-03T17:57:00.658-04:002014-08-03T17:57:00.658-04:00Thanks for catching the typo, Siobhan! And good po...Thanks for catching the typo, Siobhan! And good point on the young/younger thing. Thanks for reading! :DElyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-83408335878641326752014-08-03T16:29:33.477-04:002014-08-03T16:29:33.477-04:00What a lovely visual. No wonder he's attracted...What a lovely visual. No wonder he's attracted to her.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-78389760402858343692014-08-03T16:14:35.527-04:002014-08-03T16:14:35.527-04:00awww, the moment when love strikes. beautiful and ...awww, the moment when love strikes. beautiful and very heartfelt. Fab snippet.J.P. Stevenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05033779212923707114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-11696253388262810902014-08-03T15:57:29.767-04:002014-08-03T15:57:29.767-04:00I like the strawberry blond hair bit; I've use...I like the strawberry blond hair bit; I've used that myself in one of my stories. I get a good image of the women. Sorry your travel plans fell through. Writing is always good, since August is a hot month in Madrid.Frank Fisherhttp://www.frankmfisher.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-10932301329471410562014-08-03T15:48:14.101-04:002014-08-03T15:48:14.101-04:00Great evocative scene, Elyzabeth. I caught a typo:...Great evocative scene, Elyzabeth. I caught a typo: "scaterring" should be "scattering", and I would change "young" in the last sentence to "younger" since both women seem youngish. Again, great snippet. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-27306103722361200212014-08-03T12:35:05.298-04:002014-08-03T12:35:05.298-04:00Gorgeous description. So real I felt I was in the ...Gorgeous description. So real I felt I was in the water with the the women. Enticing .Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-30617597031393740052014-08-03T11:57:02.136-04:002014-08-03T11:57:02.136-04:00Thanks S.J. :) As to what he's going to do...w...Thanks S.J. :) As to what he's going to do...well, I'm afraid you'll have to wait until next week. ;-)Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-88607744035674513552014-08-03T11:55:29.039-04:002014-08-03T11:55:29.039-04:00Thanks Daisy! Thanks Daisy! Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-42767785009301066502014-08-03T11:53:06.484-04:002014-08-03T11:53:06.484-04:00Thank you, Heather! :)Thank you, Heather! :)Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-73177092423135498212014-08-03T11:52:17.052-04:002014-08-03T11:52:17.052-04:00Me? A tease? Bats eyes innocently. ;-)Me? A tease? Bats eyes innocently. ;-)Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-15468509795568160042014-08-03T11:46:02.946-04:002014-08-03T11:46:02.946-04:00I'm so enjoying his focus on her. So tender. I...I'm so enjoying his focus on her. So tender. I'm definitely anxious for the next snippet. What's he going to do?!S.J. Mayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071906614814860932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-70368176127027084022014-08-03T11:27:20.877-04:002014-08-03T11:27:20.877-04:00A very enticing scene, can see why he's so att...A very enticing scene, can see why he's so attracted. Really enjoyed the snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-57394428227282944902014-08-03T09:07:44.006-04:002014-08-03T09:07:44.006-04:00Lovely description of the girls and a great sense ...Lovely description of the girls and a great sense of the gut hit that laugh gives him. Great snippet.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-8138845332359443972014-08-03T06:30:51.558-04:002014-08-03T06:30:51.558-04:00Great snippet and descriptions. I've very keen...Great snippet and descriptions. I've very keen to read what happens next. Heather Boydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12522336655445579477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-86585717064502389402014-08-03T06:01:54.298-04:002014-08-03T06:01:54.298-04:00You are such a tease, Elyzabeth! That laugh indeed...You are such a tease, Elyzabeth! That laugh indeed :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com