tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post5692811628651167828..comments2023-09-30T15:26:43.733-04:00Comments on IN A DREAM BEYOND...: He could do nothing... Reine's Salvation (Alpha Protectors) #8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors #paranormal #romance Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-20582186382026096272016-11-28T14:28:03.686-05:002016-11-28T14:28:03.686-05:00I could feel his anguish. Great snippetI could feel his anguish. Great snippetNaomi Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16693171140434692340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-79098473699450019172016-11-28T11:08:42.148-05:002016-11-28T11:08:42.148-05:00Oh wow. Talk about angsty. I wonder what he did to...Oh wow. Talk about angsty. I wonder what he did to earn such a punishment.<br />BTW I loooove this cover. ;)Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-29229141599896139582016-11-28T07:33:38.610-05:002016-11-28T07:33:38.610-05:00Nice! I can feel his anxiety!Nice! I can feel his anxiety!Lea Bronsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15167672709107761219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-11996388627834361202016-11-27T20:10:20.304-05:002016-11-27T20:10:20.304-05:00Good luck finishing NaNo. I can feel his anguish a...Good luck finishing NaNo. I can feel his anguish and defeatism. It will be good to see him change.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-53801288681251565072016-11-27T16:38:10.106-05:002016-11-27T16:38:10.106-05:00This reminds me of an idea I've run into numer...This reminds me of an idea I've run into numerous times in my craft reading: Bad decisions make good fiction.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-62371393150423488702016-11-27T13:26:56.511-05:002016-11-27T13:26:56.511-05:00A lot of angst there, very well done snippet!A lot of angst there, very well done snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-68212005227662745152016-11-27T12:04:00.921-05:002016-11-27T12:04:00.921-05:00Congrats on Nano! I'm sure you'll wrap tho...Congrats on Nano! I'm sure you'll wrap those last words up.Angelica Dawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06590063222683830585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-37166988028174344582016-11-27T11:56:32.472-05:002016-11-27T11:56:32.472-05:00Oh, I feel his anguish. Nicely done, Elyzabeth!
...Oh, I feel his anguish. Nicely done, Elyzabeth! <br /><br />Get writing now--you can do this!! 10K, here she comes!<br /><br />FYI, no snippet for me this week. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-89920634960830244302016-11-27T11:39:44.624-05:002016-11-27T11:39:44.624-05:00You'll make it to 10K, I know it! And Reine wa...You'll make it to 10K, I know it! And Reine was a fantastic, broody hero. :DAmy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-45907244211576477432016-11-27T10:14:54.340-05:002016-11-27T10:14:54.340-05:00Love love love tortured heroes ! And you've wr...Love love love tortured heroes ! And you've written him beautifully! Great snippet!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02422942404526720212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-24006806166059161282016-11-27T10:10:59.439-05:002016-11-27T10:10:59.439-05:00I wonder what it's going to take for him get t...I wonder what it's going to take for him get through the devastation to realize he's not helpless? Although it would depend on how he's been maimed, I suspect he can come back from this in one way or another. Great scene!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-60897028456970961652016-11-27T10:10:15.875-05:002016-11-27T10:10:15.875-05:00Awesome intensity, Elyzabeth. Excellent jobAwesome intensity, Elyzabeth. Excellent jobKim Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556808413747062433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-89542989639767257882016-11-27T10:10:05.870-05:002016-11-27T10:10:05.870-05:00Awesome intensity, Elyzabeth. Excellent jobAwesome intensity, Elyzabeth. Excellent jobKim Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556808413747062433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-90479136770627640902016-11-27T09:36:49.839-05:002016-11-27T09:36:49.839-05:00A man in trouble. You portrayed his suffering so w...A man in trouble. You portrayed his suffering so well!Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-13559934493787238102016-11-27T09:09:41.839-05:002016-11-27T09:09:41.839-05:00What a strong, punishing scene, Elyzabeth! Well d...What a strong, punishing scene, Elyzabeth! Well done!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-79769414136371041592016-11-27T08:45:10.330-05:002016-11-27T08:45:10.330-05:00Oh gosh, so much emotion here. He's really fee...Oh gosh, so much emotion here. He's really feeling down and out. Excellent snippet!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com