tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post6255371896120207922..comments2023-09-30T15:26:43.733-04:00Comments on IN A DREAM BEYOND...: Weekend Writing Warriors from Untitled WIP #paranormal #vampire #romance Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-79561149632688924642020-07-06T17:43:40.592-04:002020-07-06T17:43:40.592-04:00Nice descriptions, Ely. I am curious how he'll...Nice descriptions, Ely. I am curious how he'll handle his next move. He seems pretty practiced and smooth. She--not so much. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-63961243118145712982020-07-05T19:24:01.712-04:002020-07-05T19:24:01.712-04:00That's a great description of her emotions. I ...That's a great description of her emotions. I especially liked how you snuck in the sense of taste. I wonder what's causing such anxiety.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-47343318053554923052020-07-05T11:03:42.546-04:002020-07-05T11:03:42.546-04:00My interest is piqued too - great snippet! Can'...My interest is piqued too - great snippet! Can't wait for more...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-28395368178197783982020-07-04T22:29:35.089-04:002020-07-04T22:29:35.089-04:00Well, that surely seems like a bad place to be! Bu...Well, that surely seems like a bad place to be! But very interesting, to be sure.Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-61509972267495734412020-06-21T18:49:50.932-04:002020-06-21T18:49:50.932-04:00Though these two say a single word to each other, ...Though these two say a single word to each other, you manage to make their non-verbal communication clear and interesting. That's rare and quite a feat.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-90693299016388222942020-06-21T17:12:09.534-04:002020-06-21T17:12:09.534-04:00You made me feel her nervousness, her tension and ...You made me feel her nervousness, her tension and anxiety. He seems calm, yet intrigued. Good juxtaposition. Like you, the comments have made me want to continue working on my wip. Good luck!Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-62781183056012354302020-06-21T11:53:57.005-04:002020-06-21T11:53:57.005-04:00Good details and I thought this was an intriguing ...Good details and I thought this was an intriguing snippet. I'll definitely keep reading!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-81552921185546583192020-06-21T11:42:10.025-04:002020-06-21T11:42:10.025-04:00He certainly finds her . . . tasty and so is this ...He certainly finds her . . . tasty and so is this scene. Well done!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-1561528600897687032020-06-21T07:35:45.156-04:002020-06-21T07:35:45.156-04:00Charmaine Gordon: June 20, 2020 at 8:58 PM I do h...Charmaine Gordon: June 20, 2020 at 8:58 PM I do hope she will find a way to move on. Scary.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-45013492023442989232020-06-20T20:58:09.490-04:002020-06-20T20:58:09.490-04:00Very intriguing! Why is she there for the vampires...Very intriguing! Why is she there for the vampires?Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com