tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post5574629682339321761..comments2023-09-30T15:26:43.733-04:00Comments on IN A DREAM BEYOND...: Weekend Writing Warriors from A Tempest of Passion #shifters #regencyromance Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-84039035972942249352020-05-04T10:36:38.068-04:002020-05-04T10:36:38.068-04:00How do you get a guy to leave when he isn't re...How do you get a guy to leave when he isn't ready? She's got a problem. Good description of him. Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-85917112476927986932020-05-04T08:07:16.139-04:002020-05-04T08:07:16.139-04:00Great description! I hope she finds something rede...Great description! I hope she finds something redeemable about him, god she sounded harsh. But you know what, I liked her harshness. Brittanyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11908242131644763201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-85413377529826037112020-05-04T01:06:00.166-04:002020-05-04T01:06:00.166-04:00Great description. I'm with Veronica. I mean.....Great description. I'm with Veronica. I mean...he saved her, right? I wonder if her description of him will change somewhere in the future? Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-66020425112148802742020-05-03T17:58:54.064-04:002020-05-03T17:58:54.064-04:00The way he's described from her POV makes it a...The way he's described from her POV makes it abundantly clear why she wants to be rid of him.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-58256280588208587362020-05-03T12:15:23.132-04:002020-05-03T12:15:23.132-04:00Well done! Great use of description that wasn'...Well done! Great use of description that wasn't "telling". He was completely shown. Very edgy, too.Dixie Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06935739014909742856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-46263042862155729892020-05-03T12:01:05.387-04:002020-05-03T12:01:05.387-04:00He must have some redeeming virtues LOL! Very desc...He must have some redeeming virtues LOL! Very descriptive snippet - I could really visualize him.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-66102342018621156012020-05-02T20:06:32.969-04:002020-05-02T20:06:32.969-04:00I like that she doesn't back down from him.I like that she doesn't back down from him. Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com