tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post4321147405644253413..comments2023-09-30T15:26:43.733-04:00Comments on IN A DREAM BEYOND...: The song of the unfulfilled ~ Weekend Writing Warriors on Alpha Protectors 4 #paranormalromance #fantasyElyzabeth M. VaLeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-16114326188385670722019-05-19T16:16:05.545-04:002019-05-19T16:16:05.545-04:00Wow, this passage sure is building toward . . . so...Wow, this passage sure is building toward . . . something. Good job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-22188939492319806402019-05-19T16:01:32.292-04:002019-05-19T16:01:32.292-04:00Good luck with your submission. This scene is so p...Good luck with your submission. This scene is so powerful. Scared me.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-15727522695646845642019-05-19T11:43:49.253-04:002019-05-19T11:43:49.253-04:00WHOA! That snippet built and built and just wow. T...WHOA! That snippet built and built and just wow. That's some terrific writing there...can't wait to read more.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-30503493798166091572019-05-19T09:18:21.522-04:002019-05-19T09:18:21.522-04:00Dark, raw power just oozes from this snippet. No w...Dark, raw power just oozes from this snippet. No wonder she falls out! Very powerful scene!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-19582906682315371022019-05-19T08:00:52.692-04:002019-05-19T08:00:52.692-04:00Definitely something powerful in that place. All t...Definitely something powerful in that place. All the best with this submission!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-31322218863256428292019-05-19T08:00:45.206-04:002019-05-19T08:00:45.206-04:00Whoa! What a powerfully built scene! Nice job!Whoa! What a powerfully built scene! Nice job!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-77055255413326070732019-05-19T07:50:22.018-04:002019-05-19T07:50:22.018-04:00Well done, my friend. It's a winner.Well done, my friend. It's a winner.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.com