tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post4210539814416712426..comments2023-09-30T15:26:43.733-04:00Comments on IN A DREAM BEYOND...: #8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors: The Witches' Mischief 5 #fantasy #naughtyfairytales Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-79632682854784259842016-01-14T15:37:14.278-05:002016-01-14T15:37:14.278-05:00Great snippet. Love the line about the rhythmic ta...Great snippet. Love the line about the rhythmic tapping.Daryl Devoréhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00941826725131248565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-7028581426301587602016-01-10T23:54:39.276-05:002016-01-10T23:54:39.276-05:00Very mysterious... Great snippet! Leaves me wantin...Very mysterious... Great snippet! Leaves me wanting more!Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-90012993734954077822016-01-10T19:55:09.275-05:002016-01-10T19:55:09.275-05:00Well written ,Elizabeth. Now she has to grow up an...Well written ,Elizabeth. Now she has to grow up and get over herself. She is not a child so face the facts and move on.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-35772021235564414172016-01-10T19:27:21.922-05:002016-01-10T19:27:21.922-05:00I found this snippet moving and very introspective...I found this snippet moving and very introspective and a little sad, and you demonstrate these feelings very well. Good snippet.Rachel de Vinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13142396128885291395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-34555447561396476672016-01-10T16:24:08.456-05:002016-01-10T16:24:08.456-05:00Thanks guys, I'm glad you're empathizing w...Thanks guys, I'm glad you're empathizing with Morgana. She's been through a lot and she still has quite a way to go... Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-45010210939941681842016-01-10T16:05:42.196-05:002016-01-10T16:05:42.196-05:00Never easy facing change, is it. You really make u...Never easy facing change, is it. You really make us feel for her here. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-38002349461842103272016-01-10T15:31:18.798-05:002016-01-10T15:31:18.798-05:00Awww poor Morgana. She is clearly at a dark point ...Awww poor Morgana. She is clearly at a dark point in her life and your words make me feel for her. Great snippet! Look forward to reading more.Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18021898381530493048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-71127693297095418382016-01-10T15:08:07.672-05:002016-01-10T15:08:07.672-05:00I love the line "She was scared of closing he...I love the line "She was scared of closing her eyes and hearing nothing, feeling nothing." Very evocative.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-4127007420972036542016-01-10T11:14:19.584-05:002016-01-10T11:14:19.584-05:00Ah, who among us can't sympathize with that lo...Ah, who among us can't sympathize with that lonely feeling. Growing up sucks. Who's ready to return to the good old days of childhood?<br /><br />Someone? Anyone?<br /><br />Okay, I wouldn't either. It's a sad and terrifying time. Excellent snippet!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02844673914216514226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-13325611522274389622016-01-10T10:35:24.839-05:002016-01-10T10:35:24.839-05:00Very affecting snippet! I liked the glimpse into h...Very affecting snippet! I liked the glimpse into her thoughts, nice she had a happy childhood even if things aren't so good now!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-168910307580030102016-01-10T08:11:56.934-05:002016-01-10T08:11:56.934-05:00Aw, it's hard growing up, especially when thin...Aw, it's hard growing up, especially when things don't turn out at all as you expected. Beautiful snippet!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-73063225303279161192016-01-10T04:01:32.933-05:002016-01-10T04:01:32.933-05:00Very nice, Elyzabeth, pulling the reader into her ...Very nice, Elyzabeth, pulling the reader into her emotions and her thoughts. The loneliness made me empathize with her. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com