tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post3534285730218371237..comments2023-09-30T15:26:43.733-04:00Comments on IN A DREAM BEYOND...: #8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors: Luna #paranormal #romance Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-32851428499994193632015-03-15T17:21:21.369-04:002015-03-15T17:21:21.369-04:00Excellent snippet. Lots of great details, Elyzabet...Excellent snippet. Lots of great details, Elyzabeth. I must admit that I got the Vin Deisel image when I tread the snippet, too. Which isn't necessarily bad lol.<br /><br />Now I have to put on my moderator's hat and make mention of the over sentence limit. Just to keep it fair, because we do comment on all posts we find over the limit. We do see you posting week in, week out without Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-32468515552887089552015-03-15T15:26:10.987-04:002015-03-15T15:26:10.987-04:00Wow, that picture of your inspiration is something...Wow, that picture of your inspiration is something else indeed! (Fans self) Glad you didn't mind me bringing up the Riddick issue last week - I like Serrik for a possible name. Enjoyed today's excerpt, I think your heroine is holding up pretty well, all things about her situation considered!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-71721569297764883672015-03-15T14:47:28.132-04:002015-03-15T14:47:28.132-04:00Sorry, what? Did you ask me something. I'm sti...Sorry, what? Did you ask me something. I'm still staring at your inspiration and imagining meeting him in the woods.... Oh my! lol.<br />Love Siobhan's suggestion of Serrik!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-17630190135893982732015-03-15T11:58:48.927-04:002015-03-15T11:58:48.927-04:00I was thinking the same thing about the name "...I was thinking the same thing about the name "Riddick." It conjures up the vision of the guy with silver eyes who's an anti-hero. You could name him "Serrik" or something equally as strong without losing the flavor of the story. Great snippet, Elyzabeth. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-87896767812817554132015-03-15T11:12:11.708-04:002015-03-15T11:12:11.708-04:00I like it, BUT It would be difficult for her to fi...I like it, BUT It would be difficult for her to fight back-or would it. Is she strong enough to question him and stand up tall? It's your story and you know where you're going. Just sayin'.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.com