tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post2651789169038228275..comments2023-09-30T15:26:43.733-04:00Comments on IN A DREAM BEYOND...: #8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors: Luna #paranormal #romance Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-19796712013542460902015-03-23T19:33:34.986-04:002015-03-23T19:33:34.986-04:00I LIKE it! So intriguing that her destiny is tied ...I LIKE it! So intriguing that her destiny is tied to his people. and I'm wondering what happened to the boy she did meet so long ago...great stuff, fun excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-7081391601435330922015-03-22T16:56:14.062-04:002015-03-22T16:56:14.062-04:00Intriguing. My first visit, so I went back and rea...Intriguing. My first visit, so I went back and read the other weeks. I wonder why she thinks he's the alien boy from her past, yet he claims he's not. Yes, intriguing...Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-24671900733744801922015-03-22T15:52:15.428-04:002015-03-22T15:52:15.428-04:00Oh my, oh my, that's quite a promise or is tha...Oh my, oh my, that's quite a promise or is that a threat? lol Fab Snippet.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-36061269782771556382015-03-22T13:39:41.337-04:002015-03-22T13:39:41.337-04:00I like it! There's a ton of character building...I like it! There's a ton of character building in this short snippet, Elyzabeth. <br /><br />And I really like that there's a hint of a prophecy there. Excellent :-)<br /><br />The visual inspiration really isn't Riddick at all--but he rivals him in heat level. Whew! ;-) I like your name choice. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-16269680163055619842015-03-22T13:13:17.830-04:002015-03-22T13:13:17.830-04:00The new name is a good idea. I like the premise yo...The new name is a good idea. I like the premise you've set up here. I can see conflict brewing and it makes me want more.Patricia Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05042411219884835267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-39544562310372407642015-03-22T09:00:18.765-04:002015-03-22T09:00:18.765-04:00Super good eight. Intense and giving the reader a ...Super good eight. Intense and giving the reader a lot of information. Also he's HOT!Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2834580347465588099.post-50374995618450242522015-03-22T07:49:14.903-04:002015-03-22T07:49:14.903-04:00I like the new name. I think it works well. Loved ...I like the new name. I think it works well. Loved the snippet too. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com